Quiet Poetry Lounge : i was taken...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by baller, Jun 27, 2001.

  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Taken

    By a moment of pleasure

    Caught up

    In
    Love
    And
    Lust

    Whatever

    I don’t know

    Was it a fairytale
    That told the story
    Of ages long gone

    I LOVE YOU.

    Is that gone, too

    Is it?

    Was it a desperate plea
    On bended knees
    Did I beg;
    “baby, please!”

    Did I cry
    Tears of joy
    Or, were they make-believe

    Did I?

    Or, did you just leave?

    I was caught up
    By a moment of pleasure

    I was taken.

    Do you feel me?
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baller....


    umm hmm... i feel ya!
    probably more than you know! :)

    ThatsReal.
    SunShyne~
     
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    honeyluv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BALLER

    AWWWWW I CAN RELATE TO THAT AND THAT'S A VERY TOUCHING PIECE AND I LIKE IT AND I HOPE YOU DIDN'T GET CAUGHT UP IN A MOMENT OF PLEASURE.......:eek:
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    baller, i'm lovin' this piece, fo sho! yeah...caught up.

    ~~~inkdrops~~~
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    been there, done that.
    the see saw emotions are over with here.

    however this is one ride probably everyone has taken and can relate to.

    this piece is real and nice by the way.

    keep ballin'
    from jh's garden.
     
  6. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    occasionally...

    we get all wrapped up in the moment and start seeing things that aren't even there...reading between the lines of I WISH when wishing and dreaming isn't a part of the game. Oh, but for that one moment....ummm.

    let the house say.........

    be still my quaking heart.

    One.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    HEY BALLER

    MAN!
    I'VE BEEN THERE IN THE MOMENT
    OF LOVE QUEST THAT LEFT ME IN
    LUST FOR WHAT WAS MAN!! DA MOTION
    TOOK ME BUT I'VE MADE IT OVER
    SOMETYME I WONDER
    WAS IT ALL A MTYH
    OR WAS IT REAL!!
    STILL THINKING ABOUT THAT.
    WE CAN GET TRAP IN OUR OWN LUST
    FOR LOVE THAT NEVER WAS AND GET CAUGHT
    UP!!..............IS IT LOVE OR LUST????
     
  8. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lust or love...in the spirit of the moment, it doesn't really matter. thanks for the read.

    One.
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baller

    Well now.... hmmm....let me think....

    YEP! I feel you!

    Nice scribe poet!!

    One :heart:
     
  10. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2...

    thanks for the read.

    One.
     
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