Quiet Poetry Lounge : I Was Made For You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by IfUComeSoftly, Jan 31, 2006.

  1. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know
    Certainly with certainty
    That I was made for you
    That I was made from you
    When you were just a boy
    God took a fragment of your bone
    And placed it in my mother’s womb
    That’s why just below your heart
    Lies the faintest hint of a scar
    You know that scar
    The one that I rub my lips across
    Late at night when the moon is full
    When we’re at peace as all is quiet
    You know the scar that same scar
    That no one can quite recall what happened
    No one knows but God and I
    And you… but you’ve forgotten
    Still I know what transpired
    Just as sure as I draw breath
    It’s the epitome of perfect imperfection
    It’s the mark of grace and a union unconsummated
    It adds validity and solidarity
    That blemish holds the confirmation of us
    You embody every fiber of my being
    Filling me to the very brim
    Because I am a part of you
    I feel as you feel… hurt as you hurt
    When you’re joyous, I’m elated
    When you’re in pain, I’m in sorrow
    Because when you were just a boy
    God took a fragment of your bone
    And placed it in my mother’s womb
    We’re no miracle, phenomenon, marvel,
    Extraordinary prodigy of happenstance
    We are one of many pious unions
    Ordained by destiny and God
    Love… we are one
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    With his bone, that would certainly make you as one, nice drop poet...I like the flow of it
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    simply beautiful my sista keep the flows coming and you must hit me up to tell me whats up with cha. i give it :star: :star: :star: :star: :star: :kiss1:

    im sure the fella in question will appreciate this!!!!!!!! heheheheeh
     
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    soblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My gifted sista this is truly beautiful
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow this was awesome enjoyed it much ya flow is sweet
    made for me wow !!!!
     
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    Akilah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That is so beautiful...very touching and sweet
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I loved the Sister
    This was a hott dop
    Much Love to you
    Hope you start writing more now Sis
     
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    tashatoya Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awww, this just gives me that warm, fuzzy feeling inside! This piece was beautiful poet I really, really love it... It's love defined at an angle because there so many ways which we can capture it (smile)
     
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    Remarkable and lovely write poet!
    I love this piece!:heart:
     
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    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are talented.
     
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