Black Poetry : I was decieved

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  1. theindiangiver

    theindiangiver New Member MEMBER

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    Deception

    I was lured here under false pretenses
    And since then, my senses have became
    NUMBED
    DUMBED.

    My emotions allowed you to pick at my heart with chopsticks, believe your compliments that stemmed from bull****...I was just to be another hit.

    But now, wisdom has thawed out reality and I have been able to make sense of my situation.

    I'll just bottle up the left-over love I have for you and put it in my mind's muesuem, where my past lives.

    These feelings will be put it in glass vases for my heart's face to look upon.

    They say Love is blind but...I've had my sight all along.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed indeed what they think one can't see
    is seen wit the third eye ....welcome within the family
    well felt scribe
     
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    nice drop
    here :angel1:
     
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    Sometimes we see, but don't want to see...I liked the way you posed this, keep flowing.
     
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    Love the last line...
    we do have our sight all along
    but sometimes we so desperately
    want to believe ....
    Love the way you crafted this!
     
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    Yes I know how you feel and I love that last line too. Even if we can see it's sometimes hard to let go.
     
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    Perfect example of how the past,present and future is connected forever!
    Loved It!
     
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    theindiangiver New Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the read!!! Much luv!
     
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    theindiangiver New Member MEMBER

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    Yes indeed it's hard to let go, but it's so easy to remember, get caught up in the moments, then get ta holding back on again!!
     
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    I'll just bottle up the left-over love I have for you and put it in my mind's muesuem, where my past lives.
    This was deep
    Nice floE :heart:
     
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