Black Poetry : I was born for this SEE INSIDE MY MENTAL

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  1. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Got Sick Flows Like Shaq Free Throws
    But I neva miss,cuz I was born for this
    To tell you what's on my mind and describe this world to the blind
    Maybe they can't see,so I must translate and set things straight
    I neva miss a hit like I said before I neva miss
    The words are equipt with the truth to sugar coat like Baby Ruths
    Sometimes I don't even know what I'm sayin' when I say what I say
    Who cares anyway
    They wanna talk about you when you mess up
    But when you doin what's right and can be seen in the light they act like they don't know what's up
    Standin' like Trick Daddy my arms folded shut up
    Your lies are frozen over ICE COLD
    Start from my toes on up through the love below
    I'm tellin' you dawg I feel it all over me to put you down in deep weeps
    Steady yellin' let's take it to the streets
    But I'm bigga than that cuz I aint like you cats
    Fall from others words when they talkin crazy about you
    Tryin to do what others do foo' just be you boo
    Cuz I don't mess with followers straight leaders
    Willin' to go the distance not meters
    It's a shame they think because I'ma girl and I wear tight jeans
    And my face be mean that I'm tryna be seen
    I don't care if you was Chingy I ain't yellin Right There
    Cuz my eyes ain't chinky and I know what you're thinking
    My hats blue and it say Princess
    Not to impress,but to let you know I'ma empress
    I ain't tryin to be ya mistress and cause distress
    Lil' shawty tryin' to get where she posed to be sittin hi on a cloud with her daddy
    Not that lil rude bwoy in a all black caddy
    Yea I might be blingin' wit my name on my chain and stuntin' wit diamond rangs
    Shinin' blindin' earangs and a coat with a lot of names
    But holup didn't my boy Shakes say ,"What's In A Name."
    I'ma ask you:
    What's in my shoes that got you confused?
    What's in my pants that'll put u in a trance and make ya wanna dance?
    Starin' at my appearance dawg you don't know me
    Think I'ma be playin games wit you yellin,"Barney!"
    I can't remember the last time I watched Cartoons or popped balloons
    So your childish ways are back in the olden days
    Sad but true you needa get up on my level
    Stop being so judgemental
    If you ain't tryin to see past my physical to my mental.

    (just sumtin' off the top of my head,I just had to let it out:wave::)
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh, I am feeling this, boys need to start lookin within to see the real deal. And I particularly liked this line:
    But holup didn't my boy Shakes say ,"What's In A Name."
    He certainly did, hence "my" name....:) This rap just flowed on down the line, well done.
     
  3. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :lol:Thanks Watz I knew you would like it,because I thought of you when I wrote that line:wave:
    :hot:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    felt ya on this piece .....tyte drop poet flow on
     
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    sahara heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow gurl... u really got it going on in this piece! keep doing what you do and just so u know... i am convinced! you were made for this! nuff respect. :bowdown:
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx Rich:wink:You always got something to say brotha feelin the love:wave:
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sahara thanx a lot glad somebody feelin' me and you know how they say game recognize game...well true poets recognize true poets:wink:
     
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