Black Poetry : i was a rock

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Feb 26, 2004.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i was a rock,
    fixed on a single space,
    fashioned by God's Own Finger,
    that traveled up my spine
    to bring chills up my vertebra

    i Wondered at why Jill fell down the hill
    with Jack, and why my flows left so much Controversy..

    i tried to calculate the diameter
    of a supernova star,
    so that i could eat it
    and shine from the inside.....

    i was renewed to the point where
    "new" was outdated
    and "fresh" was rotten...

    i was not moved.....
    i was not solved....
    i was NEVER corrected
    i just was.....

    copywrite 2004, all rights reserved
     
  2. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that's wassup...
    4sho

    1luv
     
  3. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey story

    Your words are so mentally mature
    Blowin my mind
    4 sho
    great one
     
  4. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey nita, hey twofish, thanks for the love,
    -story
     
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    just let it be .... let it be
     
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    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the_story,
    Thas Strength
    i enjoyed this write
    it just was
    and i just was.
    and obviously you, just was

    Peace and Blessings
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    that was awesome writting indeed u have it and showing it !!
    love it lil sistah
     
  8. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fambly im glad u feelin this peice...
    much :heart:
    -story
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You just are a scribe that writes beyond her years, and this, never gets old, keep flowing the way you do.
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks watz....just keepin it real...
    much :heart:
    -story
     
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