Black Poetry : I Wanted

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by EbonyQueen06, Apr 8, 2004.

  1. EbonyQueen06

    EbonyQueen06 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wanted u to be the 1st one to hear da story I wrote in Creative Writing,
    but u weren't.
    I wanted to show you my hair braided,
    but u didn't answer your ******* celli to care.
    I wanted to read da poem just 4 your eyes,
    but I just want to make that **** ashes.
    I wanted to tell what my ex- boyfriend said and get your opinion from u,
    but I got it from someone else.
    I wanted to tell you da trouble I'm in,
    but I'll just keep that **** to myself.
    I wanted you to pick a name for my plastic baby,
    but I'll do it myself.
    I wanted to curse u out 4 hanging up on me,
    but I acted incoherent.
    I wanted why u didn't come back to the libary,
    but I could give a **** less.
    I wanted to know if I'm really important in your life,
    but now I know the answer.
    I wanted know why u didn't return my phone calls,
    but I don't want to hear da same excuse.
    I wanted to hear u say "I love you,"
    but I would think u were lying.

    I dont care anymore,
    I don't need to be with u.
    W live 2 differen lifestyles
    and I don't understand yours.
    I'm too young to stress over a *****,
    so I'm saying GOOD-BYE!
    Dedicated to my ex Boyfriend, u know who u are
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hard when a relationship ends, but when on door closes another one opens, in time. Keep flowing poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!
    sometime we have to let go to start again new !!
    this here was felt and hope he see this ............
     
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