Black Poetry : i wanted to write you

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MsDLite, Jul 24, 2001.

  1. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i wanted to write you
    long before my pen
    rested upon paper of linen
    comforted by the flatness of
    my cherry oak desk...

    dusky sun rays pouring through
    blinds...spilling upon brown hands
    which form fists on the desk...
    i so wanted to write you...

    i am on a flight piloted by
    my soul...my destination
    not measure by space
    time
    or distance
    my being is soaring...
    somewhere...

    perhaps today
    my fingers can once again
    caress the metal
    particulars of the fountain
    pen i used to "sing" melodic
    fragments of life
    to you
    during evening sunsets...
    ocean rushes...
    ...and moonlit nights...

    MsDLite (c) 07.01
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Speak

    Poetess. How I relate to this...feeling. Let the ink do the healing.
    Share with us your heart's desires.

    Beautiful.

    a
     
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    AS I READ THE THOUGHTS...

    that were caressed by the fist that made manifest the words that brought joy to my heart...i meditate on the particulars that brought you to me.

    MAY I WRITE TO YOU?:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ahhhhh!!

    up lifting in my mind
    as ya pen rest beside u
    i smoothly think of u
    and ask may i write too u

    Ms.Dlite u flowed so sweetly :heart:
     
  5. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your pen has reached a new place...the circumstances of lfe has led you into a deeper realm of insight...i have watched and read your scribes over time but i must say that this one rings true of the newness of your scribe...

    if you could see what i see, understanding would be second nature...

    excellent scribe and deeply profound...

    i honor you today..
     
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    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is Tight!!!!

    I like the pattern the content...This was all around good.. I'm really diggin this flow!!!
     
  7. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    many thanks...

    i thank you for reading...
    simple words
    simple feelings
    simply...simple

    to my poet friends...write me

    thanks dnommo...
     
  8. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "...dusky sun rays pouring through blinds..spilling upon brown hands"

    You heal words....your pen has a way...of healing the pain...

    Even when you bring the pain....it is ohhhhh sooooo smoooth

    *desktop-scribes*
     
  9. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I agree...

    ...with e'rybody else. Exceptional serenity, leaping outta this piece...:)
     
  10. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well...

    writing soothes the soul
    relaxes the mind
    excites the physical...

    (thanks Hunter)

    i am pleased
    ...that i labored
    and gave birth to this
    piece...

    late night meditation, pen~nation

    inspired by many of you...
    but you already know that...
     
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