Black Poetry : I Wanted To Tell Her.... (Not Placed)

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  1. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wanted to tell her that I loved her
    and that I would fly through galactic meteor showers
    into a the black hole of pain.
    Because I love her.

    I wanted to tell her that I loved her
    and that I would dive into the deep bluesssss sea
    and snack on sharks, swallow whales in the dark
    and reduce myself to plankton on the bottom of the ocean.
    Because I love her.

    I thought to tell her
    that I would travel back in time to ancient Kemit
    and relinquish my throne as Pharaoh
    enslave my self and generations
    free every Hebrew, make bricks with no straw
    Because I love her.

    I wanted to tell her
    that because I love her
    I would submerge myself so far into her
    that upon having an emotional traffic accident
    and being rushed to the local ER
    trauma surgeons would be traumatized
    to find that there was nothing left of me
    on the gurney
    for all the would see is not me
    but she. Because I love her so much.

    I wanted to tell her that I loved her
    and that I would rewrite the periodic table
    and shuffle iron, phosphate, nitrogen, and oxygen
    redefine water from two parts hydrogen and one part oxygen
    to 2parts her smile and 1part her heart
    so that her love could become the carbon 14 dating
    of my ancient years
    and latent traces of her
    could determine our love for years
    and love anthropologists would declare
    they had found the first man
    that ever loved
    because her love –loved me
    loved me, loved me, eternally.

    I wanted to tell her
    that , that, that, I loved her.
    but I couldn’t find the words.
    So I was left with … I love you!

    And guess what...
    ...She loves me too.
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh, my brother! To have a love like that, is a blessing. Your words were so deliberately aching, brimming with the meaning of all this bliss....wow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man this kinda lovin is grand and to perfection u have it in high gear
    lovin it all flow head on POET !
     
  4. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks sis. keep on lovin'!
    k


     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    rich - thanks as always for your support. be blessed bruh.
    k


     
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    *sigh*
    i read and find myself with NO words my brotha no words :grouphug:
     
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    smh

    :jumping: :jumping: Daaaaaang.....brutha klab :jumping: :jumping:

    I'm jus speechless
    You always leave me like that with your spoken word....jus don't know how to respond because no words can do you justice..so I'll jus give you this


    :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
    :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
    :heart: :heart: :heart:
    :heart: :heart:
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  8. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    some of us are still just hopeless romanitics... you can feel me...
    k


     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Much luv Sista Nita. Thanks for reading and flowin' with a brutha. be blessed. k

     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice very nice.. deep too.
     
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