Black Poetry : I Want

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Sep 22, 2005.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I want someone to know me.
    Learn my ways.

    I want someone to hold me
    and spend the days.

    I want someone to let me
    pour myself into their heart.

    I want someone to do the same.
    To me that is a start.

    Mold me if you want to.
    I will open up my heart.

    Let me pour into you.
    I desire the same.
    I have endless boundaries to define.
    Tell me if I go to fast.

    I will slow it just for you.
    Don’t criticize, but tell me true.
    I’ll see the honesty in you.

    Love at first site exist if you believe.
    I do so I will see and feel the love
    that you have inside of you.

    I long to bring it forth and
    baste in its heavenly bliss.
    I know I love how you smile
    and talk, I feel it in your kiss.

    The way you look at me
    it’s deeper than a normal gaze.
    It’s almost like your
    x-raying me in your eyes.
    In them I love to gaze.
    Look thru me but you see.
    That I want someone to love me.
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice Piece HODEE,
    Always a pleasure to read your work.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gee Hodee, this sounds what many would want, I know that I do. Such a genuine flow brotha, I enjoyed this.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wanting to feel and love the same as you give is pure
    this piece was pose beautifully and from da heart i enjoyed the wanting
    tyte drop bruh !
     
  5. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    i came because it was u hodee
    but the first 3 lines held me .. kept me here..
    it starts like a beautiful song...