Quiet Poetry Lounge : I WANT

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Keita Kenyatta, Apr 2, 2004.

  1. Keita Kenyatta

    Keita Kenyatta going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    You really have no idea
    of what it's all about...
    of how I long to fill your soul
    and truely turn you out.
    To fly you on the wings of love
    and walk naked in your soul...
    to open up my chest and say,
    yes you have full control.
    I want to look into your eyes
    and really feel me there...
    and though we both breathe,
    each breath we'll always share.
    I want to write a poem
    from the end to the start,
    and know that each line
    embraces your heart.
    I want to wake in the night
    while you're dreaming real deep,
    and hear my name whispered
    in your sleep.
    I want to taste your sweat,
    lick you soak and wet,
    mesmerize you so you won't forget.
    Pray to you before I go to sleep,
    for my soul is yours and only
    yours to keep.
    I want to let you know all of this...
    so I'll seal this poem with A HEART FELT KISS !!
     
  2. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmmm I'm loving this vibe truly.
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My heart still :jumping: for joy...when I wake up every morning,
    and it's :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: even more,
    for all this love you're pouring... :luv:
    love makes the world go round... :spinn: :spinn: :spinn: :spinn: :spinn:
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    pure love here ..........
    this was so beautifully done
    she is one lucky woman to have ya heart
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a love poured out onto paper. Just makes me smile to read of black love like this, cherish this.
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feelin this too like your vibe
    and the words are sweet. :heart:
    Smooches!!!