Black Poetry : I want you

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Nahshon, Oct 22, 2009.

  1. Nahshon

    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do I want you?
    what kind of question is that to ask me...
    Girl you know I want you
    I want to bathe within you
    to bathe within your waters of life
    to be embraced within you
    to be embraced within your arms
    I want to smell that sweet honeysuckle scents that emanates
    articulates
    radiates
    from your very soul.

    I want to whisper sweet nothings and innuendoes in your ear
    With physical touch release all your cares
    release all your fears

    Yo quiero
    Yo quiero
    yo quiero jugar in su Rio
    Can you hear me?
    I said
    I want to play in your river
    to touch and play with pubic fur
    to be entangled within in you
    entangled within your hair
    to be enveloped within you
    to be enveloped with your sweet kisses
    Oh yes girl I want you...I want you in the worst way
    I want to suck and **** the taste buds right out of your mouth

    I want your blouse
    to mysteriously lower
    to reveal your small yet firm bosoms
    to feel soft pomegranate breasts against my chest
    soft pomegranate breasts against my chest
    while you caress and cover me
    "Cover me, cover me, spread your precious love all over me"
    While you caress and cover my secret tower

    I want to taste the nectars that overflow so sweet
    to rub honey blossom oils neck to thigh till soulful eyes meet
    Kissing navel
    as I hear you whisper lower
    I desire to drink
    to drink...to quench my thirst
    to be loving
    to be lovemaking
    Making love to
    mind spirit soul and body
    to quench my thirsts
    to taste
    to taste the natural salts
    The spice of bodies
    to taste tears
    Sweat, aphrodisiacal excess

    I want to throb
    to throb and thrive and grow inside
    of you
    I want you to feel the joy
    of my growing throbbing love toy
    swimming in your streams
    as we shake
    scratching
    shredding sheets
    turning erotic positions into acrobatic feats
    As I watch you Quivering
    with eyes flip backward
    as we slip together into the most pleasant state
    we explode and rock in soulful lock that beckons body heats
    explode and rock in soulful lock that beckons forth the approaching Orgasmic shock
    to be loving
    To be love making
    To your mind, soul, spirit and body
    to taste the natural spice of your body
    You see
    Salt-aholic I am to your tears,
    To your sweat
    To your aphrodisical excess
    I want to love till sweat bleeds
    breeds
    bursts
    drowning love and thirst
    till 1 + 1 no longer makes 2
    to dream of dreams of you
    dreaming dreams of me
    dreaming dreams of you
    With certainty girl...
    You now know I want you...

    But only if you want me to...
     
  2. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Well, ALRIGHTY-THEN! lol



    Brother, I'm 'bout scurred to read part 2! lol


    You don't hold back, do ya?!
     
  3. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dam* if she says no holla back
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i likes i likes, on to part two
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Man go get her ........get what you want !!!....wow
     
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    wow.....jus.....wow......sex was just dripping all over this piece....i like it! lol

    on to part 2
     
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    LOL!


    I can't say the same thing didn't cross my mind! lol
     
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    As a man..I wasn't sure if I should reply to this piece...but I did anyway...nice flow homie...do what you do
     
  9. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Afternoon Nahshon

    When you putting down like that... how could any woman resist?

    Hot drop!


    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco:dance:
     
  10. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    crazy smiles atcha', Nahshon...very nicely written. gosh, i think i am blushin'. okay, i'm over it.