Black Poetry : I Want You

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  1. Nahshon

    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do I want you?
    Do I want you?
    Girl you know I want you
    to bathe within you
    to bathe within your waters of life
    To be embraced within you
    To be embraced within your arms
    To smell sweet honeys suckle scent that emanates.
    That articulate
    That radiates from soul.
    I want to whisper sweet nothings and innuendoes in your ear
    With physical touch release all your cares.
    Release your fears.
    Yo quiero
    Yo quiero
    Yo quiero jugar en su Rio.
    I want
    I want
    I want to play in your river
    To touch and play with pubic fur.

    To be entangled within you
    To be entangled within your hair
    To be enveloped within you
    To be enveloped with your sweet kisses.
    Oh yes I want you I want you in the worst way
    I want to suck (and ****) the taste buds right out of your mouth.

    I want your blouse to mysteriously lower
    To reveal your small yet firm bosoms,
    Oh, To feel soft pomegranate breasts against my chest.
    Soft pomegranate breasts against my chest.
    While you caress and cover me
    “Cover me, cover me, spread your precious love all over me.”
    While you caress and cover my secret tower.
    I want to taste the nectars that overflow so sweet.
    To rub honey blossom oils neck to thigh till soulful eyes meet.
    Kissing navel
    Kissing navel
    As I hear you whisper lower
    I desire to drink
    To drink to quench my thirst
    To be loving
    To be lovemaking
    Making love to
    Mind spirit and body
    To quench my thirsts
    To taste
    To taste natural salts
    Spice of body
    To taste tears
    Sweat, aphrodisiacal excess

    I want to throb
    To throb and thrive and grow inside
    Of you, of you,
    I want you to feel the joy
    Of my growing throbbing love toy
    Swimming in your streams we shake scratching, shredding sheets
    Turning erotic positions into acrobatic feats.
    Quivering,
    Eyes flip backward
    As we slip into the most pleasant state
    We explode and rock in soulful lock that beckons body heats
    To explode and rock in soulful lock that beckons forth Cummings orgasmic shock.
    To be loving mind, spirit, and body.
    To taste natural spice of body
    Salt-aholic I am to your tears, sweat, your aphrodisiacal excess
    To love till sweat bleeds, breeds, bursts, drowning love and thirst till one plus one no longer makes two.
    To dream of dreams of you
    Dreaming dreams of me
    Dreaming dreams of you.
    Oh yes girl you know I want you…
    But only if you want me too…

    Nah’shon-Rae 8/97 ©

    :devil: :jawdrop:
     
  2. Nahshon

    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am surprised no comments???
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm lovin this...it was a great read...
     
  4. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sweetie you sho nuff got it right
    you left my mouth hanging wide open
    i mean, gosh, can't you just feel the sex??
    You have the ability to mix mind sex and foreplay
    In one poem

    :toast: CHEERS TO YOU!!! :toast:

    Keep on keepin on!!!

    Play
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte scribe brutha i missed this one
    dis was awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    only one thing...:jawdrop:...man....that was tyte!!!!!
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop: nice nice nice almost as hot as oops almost went to far lol I like I like
     
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    to bathe within your waters of life

    like that line...could hear this being read at an open mic.....

    great drop

    up for ya
     
  9. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is...one of the best pieces I've ever read ( but don't tell anyone). Seriously, this was so captivating and raw but in a tastefully, well crafted manner.

    You are...a poet! Encore...Encore...Encore