Black Poetry : I Want You All The Tyme

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  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can’t explain this feeling—
    I want you all the tyme
    You’re always & foreva painted on my mind…
    I picture us the way we were…
    when we were together last tyme
    It was so divine… sweet man of mine
    I can’t help but press rewind…
    You walking towards me whispering—
    “tonight is your nyght”…
    black love incense smelling just ryght
    You dimming the lyghts &
    handing me a glass of zinfindel—white
    the candles glowing…
    You staring into my eyes knowingly
    & I remember… seductively starting to undress
    knowing what was next… finding it near
    impossible to mask my anxiousness…
    I’d waited all day long to feel your brilliant caress
    & taste your perfect kiss…
    have your body pressed… thigh to thigh
    & breast to chest… over mine
    Sitting at my desk I was going out of my mind…
    reminiscing about fingertips & soft lips
    dancing up & down my spine
    the pain & pleasure grind… as hips slowly wind
    I had to mentally check myself to stop
    looking at the tyme— wishing it were 5
    Thing about it is… it’s been like this for years
    You affecting me beyond my mental belief
    My heart says—
    “Sunshyne, that’s love… there’s no reason or rhyme!”
    I give up on explainin’ it…
    I just want you all the tyme.

    © SunshyneOrygynals 2001, all rights reserved
     
  2. PoeticMaster

    PoeticMaster Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just take me into yo rays of love
    i am the daydream the night seen
    take me.. nice flow
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my Nubian Kang...

    thank you for the love...
    you are appreciated more
    than you could possibly
    comprehend!! :)

    ThatsReal...
    Sunshyne~
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm feeling this appropriately....

    i had to bring this one from the depths of the
    page... i posted it before you guys got here.

    now it has EXTRA SPECIAL meaning... :wink:
     
  5. Afridancr

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    Sunshyne...you leave me

    *speechless* :)
     
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    raheem Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I saw you

    sitting at the PC. you look so beautifully vulnerable from the backside... :wink:

    this was tight the first time I read it...feelin the tug much tighter now... :D

    r
     
  7. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    simply a beautiful piece...i can relate, mos def. yes, indeed.
     
  8. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice one....

    Likin' the flow of it all!!
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA,

    once again you conquer! tight piece queen.

    I challenge you...write "out the box". write about something so far outside of yourself that when you're done you'll believe you've been there. write outside of love, it's such a blessed topic, and don't get me wrong cause you have this love thing down pat...but challenge yourself. As a matter of fact I challenge everyone who hits GA (I know it's going to be all of destee cause my gurl's got it like that)to write "outside of the box", their box.

    once again queen this piece was tight and love personified!

    much luv,verb
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    DAYUMM!

    AND AFTER ALL THESE YEARS I THOUGHT
    U DIDN'T SEE ME .......DID I DO THAT!?
    TAKE ME IN THOUGHTS
    CARESS ME IN YO MIND
    OOOOOOOOL! HOW DEVINE
    AS WE UNWINED IN TYME
    OF LOVE WE VIBE SEXUAL HEALING
    AND BY 5 U CUM FROM THE LOVE
    MOTION OF ME .......TAKE ME
    HOLD MY SOUL AND SHYNE YO RAYS
    LETS PLAY AGAIN AND AGAIN
    DESK TOP UNDER THE DESK
    FEEL ME AS I LICK YA ****
    FACE BETWEEN YA SPLIT
    I SIP AND DIP THE HOUR AWAY
    LETS PLAY!
     
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