Black Poetry : I Want You 2

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Nahshon, Oct 22, 2009.

  1. Nahshon

    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I want you...
    I want you to stop f*cking with my head...
    I want you buck bare naked laying in my bed
    I want you spread eagle exposing your nest of eggs
    While you slowly wrap your legs around my waist
    Only after 3 hours of you on my face...
    See I am not afraid to chase you...just wanted to know if you were up for me to fight for you...
    Cuz I'll fight through
    boroughs, cities, states, countries, worlds and galaxies
    just to get to you...
    I've always wanted you...
    From the first dream I had of you
    From the first phone conversation we spoke of each others truths
    I can't stand to be away from you for too long
    You're the inspiration that keeps me going on.
    You see I got this haunting feeling in my dreams
    Like you it's you calling back at me
    To wake up and stand up and fight for what you want
    Now when I first started seeing dreams come true I was in shock
    I’ve been fearful to show you the secrets I hide
    Which has been revealed to me
    In the streets of Queens
    A seventh dimensional blunt twisting in my mind and hands
    Making me seem like Im superHUEman
    Yet all I ever wanted was your love.
    It wasn’t about your beauty
    Or your body
    It was never about me just trying to get in your pants
    I really can’t see myself with anyone else but you
    I dont care who I have to fight to get to you
    I am coming back home real soon
    I did something disgraceful yet I know it can be taken back
    I was told all I need to do is fight for you
    Fight with honesty, integrity, and conviction
    not from just written thoughts
    but speak with you from the genuineness of my heart
    without fear of what I might say that may not sound right
    I learned that at the drop of a dime n*gg*s say and do
    Not just sit there and not talk.
    Talk the things of the mind of the heart of the streets of the World
    Can you hear me I am claiming you as my girl
    I want your sons and daughters to be mine
    See I crossed over to the other side one night just for you
    I am back to feeling myself in truth.
    The truth is I need and want you more than I ever thought I did
    I always throw on the brakes when Im supposed to hit the gas
    See I know that I’m suppose to be with you
    this is a fact I knew from our first phone call
    Yet I didn’t want to step up to the plate
    When I was missing teeth and overweight
    I saw the look on your face when we first met
    It said he's a nice guy, but I may not be the type you look for
    Well I’ve made some changes because of how I feel about me
    I know that you like what you see
    Yet there are changes that have been made inside of me
    This I want to express to you viscerally
    You will hear me speak not in any soft weak tones
    But in the tones of what I really feel
    Because no matter what I want you as my lady
    I want you as my world
     
  2. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Awww, SOOKY-SOOKY, now!



    Whew!



    Imma hafta shake this one off! lol


    But, these lines touched me the most!...

    :bowdown:
     
  3. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww, go that that woman n start your family...i really liked both parts. kinda hit close to home for me.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Man no need to say more go get her ............this was fly fo real !
     
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    *throwing a towel*

    well good d*^&* LOL this poem did it for me Im in awe this was excellent
     
  6. Nahshon

    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I want to thank

    thank you for all you lovely comments...I had fun writing this piece.
     
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    DrSeide Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    some women love honesty... this piece is dope bruh