Black Poetry : i want to

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by daroc, Jan 16, 2005.

  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i want to write a poem
    thats concise
    str8 to the point
    siting facts on life
    makin me seem all that
    intelligent and creative
    about all that could motivate
    a poem that would cultivate
    stimulate minds
    have bodies movin'
    wanting to embrace
    facts is i want to write a poem
    expressin everything
    for every race
    touchin ur soul
    changin lives
    makin peopole rethink possibilities
    all cuz my poem they related
    it elevated
    their tru emtions
    tru feelings on life
    wishes and desires
    to write a poem
    like i do
    that could change the world
    maybe starting wit you
    i want to write a poem....
    and i think i jus did.​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tru dat indeed u did !
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's Daroc in Ya area 4 real doing the dan thang...2 the point joint my sis!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yea, I think you just did too, flow on in this vain poet!!
     
  5. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i was jus playing around.....lol.... but thanks yall....
     
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    see the depth of greatness even when playing
    that's a true poetic artist most welcome sis.
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just like that.

    That's what i love about it...

    Peace.
     
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    nice to see u back in da spot daroc....word
    keep em come'n....
    one love
    khasm
     
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    yes :read:

    yes you did :read:

    :) you came

    you saw :look:

    You conquered :hearthis: :)

    get it get it gurl :)