Black Poetry : I want to write to your mind

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  1. LadyBelle

    LadyBelle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I want to write to your mind
    I want your day dreams to insist on me
    I want you to crave this crave
    Quenching
    I want to satisfy your curiosity
    ooohhhh
    I wonder if this is what love should be
    The very thought of it
    Like grandmas hot biscuits and loving it
    Tell me……………..
    Does the sweetness of coconut milk rest in your kiss?
    Is your voice soft and alluring
    Like the waves that drift assure?
    I was just wondering down the corridors of my imagination.
    Tonight I will teach you my song.
    The words are very simple
    It is in her nature to act on her feelings,
    If you asked her she would say,
    "I was created to serve him and delight in his sweetness,
    I must drink from him, He keeps me alive.
    He is my nourishment in and out of season".
    I searched for you today in the faces of others
    Hoping you would say, "Here I am".
    I am content.
    To know you from afar
    To know you quietly and softly
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to da house of peace & respect
    i would say write and let da mind drift into da orbs of ya words
    ladybelle welcome this was indeed mind blowin continue
    There is so much i can say and do with this flow ....wow
     
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    This piece had such a heartfelt allure to it poetess. Welcome to Destee.com. Looking forward to reading much more from you, so make yourself at home, cause you are. :)
     
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    yes...I feel you here....I want your dreamz to insist on me....sounds n i c e...i want that too.

    Welcome, honey!
     
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    "i am content to know you from afar..."

    you've been reading my mind, i see...as day light's soothing rays move me...into a mellow mood that intrudes on how i should be...forcing me to think of you...to sing the song of you...cannot control the things i do. craving you.

    WeLcOmE.:)
     
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    SSSSSSSSSSSSS

    I crave to pour myself on you
    Stick to you like the syrup of peaches
    I want your scent on me
    I want to touch you to taste your aura
    To experience your song
    taste your skin
    sample your perspiration
    I do
    Spine tingling sensations I want to be
    Hair raising experience is guaranteed
    Step right up and take a seat
    $12.95 and I'll steal your speech
    Feels so good
    Words don't always adequately express
    Moans utterances
    Incomprehensibly
    So sweet I want you for breakfast
    Like the shore calling the ocean for a kiss
    Bliss
    I want to reveal your passion to you
    To usher in the new
    I want to break bread all over you
    I want to feel the pressure of your hand
    Run my fingers over your hair
    Look up at you and admire your blank stare
    I want to slide my hand down the valley of your back
    And listen to you sssssssssssssssssss
    Cause I like it when you ssssssssssssss
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Hush....shhhhhh!
    As da radiant ripple shine
    from da depth of spoken line
    drifting unto da valley
    allow da passion fruits
    to rain it's tropical forset
    for one's to taste ya essence
    let it render inside ya soul
    as handz round you in
    circle mold into a bliss
    of unknown....
     
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    LadyBelle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am casting my spell on you
    getting into the nature of you
    I want to crack atoms with you
    swim in the sea of you
    kiss the palm you your hand
    count your breaths
    and chase your exhales
    I want to just sit and watch you sleep
     
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    I wanna send you in hynotic motion
    bath in ya warth of devotion
    feel da day of your morrow
    be of ya sweetest blooming flower
    i want to know of ya sorrow
    i want to embrace your essence
    i want to mesmerize u
    inside da cocoon of two
    just to see one so true
     
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    Welcome welcome welcome sister Belle :) :wave: :)
    THIS is why I enjoy reading poetry
    Defining life takes a constant reimagining of words emotions and such
    and this peice so poetically touches on the unexpected
    and anticipation till thus
    and so much more :read:
    GOOOOD stuff sister poetess :read:
    MUCH Props sister MUCH :)
    cant wait to read more :look:
     
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