Black Poetry : ~I Want To Go~

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It’s a place I want to go
    To release ……
    In the wind
    A place I want to go
    Just
    Get lost in time
    And be free
    ohhhhhhh so free
    Upon the moon and far above
    Between the orbs and the starz
    And swim in the melody of you
    Wrap in lace and satin..
    Where wild flowers grow
    And sweet scents roam the air
    Lost
    Yes………….Lost
    You
    Me
    In the melody of us
    Just want to go where the doves go
    Flowing in a breeze to the rhythm surfing the galaxy
    You
    And
    Me
    Playing a tune of love as we
    r-e-l-e-a-s-e
    In the composition of us
    Turning keys and leave lasting notes
    Of sweet joy

    It’s a place I want to go
    To release
    In the wind
    A place I want to go
    Just
    Get lost in time


    (C) 2004
    Poetry By an Angel​
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this place is a beautiful one to go into
    love this piece it takes me into the same place
    with u ....wow!!
     
  3. Khasm13

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    sometimes it is best to be lost....
    tyte piece...
    one love
    khasm
     
  4. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'd call that a slice of heaven, I want that kind of "lost-ness" for awhile...and let the breeze run right through me...that's heaven
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seems like a peaceful place to be, very serene flow.
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$..glad it took you in..lets me know i did my job bringin it....
    thanks for the love...

    Khasm13..indeed thanks for the love

    queentswana..fo sho to just get lost like floating in heaven...thanks for the love sis

    watzinaname..it sure do ..dont it....thanks for the support

    Peace
    Angel
     
  7. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have been desiring a vacation getaway for quite sometime now. That won't be happening until November though. After reading this poem, it only made me wish that November was next month. This beautiful, but then what else would one expect from a poet such as yourself.

    ~j
     
  8. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This makes me think of a song thats the way it read to me :) go get ya piece of mind sista :)
     
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    mzblkangel,
    Melodic, this poetic wish (desire), beautifully scribed.....
    very moving....

    Peace and Blessings....
     
  10. PositiveMindset

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    Such a beautiful release of a beautiful mind.

    Keep doin' what U do.