Black Poetry : I want to feel u when you come

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I want to feel you when
    you come
    like wine waiting to be born
    from purple hued grapes
    on the verge of bursting
    to find it's way to
    desiring lips
    I want to taste your throbbing
    peach toned
    purple hued or
    deep strawberry lips
    until your moan is
    expressed through
    a tear running down my face
    onto overheated
    sheets
    ...
    can I lay my head across
    your ****oris and feel
    it's 8 million mouths open and
    close / being satisfied
    again and again
    ...
    maybe to the seventh time
    ...
    I want to feel you when you
    release.....
    ....and the dam breaks
    soaking the flax fields
    .......................................
    I want to find my way so deep into
    you that i escape through your
    skin
    shed you into another
    experience
    of
    muscle fibers contracting
    and bodies sinking
    into another day.

    (c)2003 blakverb
     
  2. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I want to feel u when you come

    woooooooo

    ease up there brother.........lol

    good post though
    keep it up

    could u tell me what u think of my post

    called 5 shots

    thanks
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Verb ya rolling in style coz dis one had me out their far out
    as my mind was racing da thoughts dis had depth and style

    flow on brutha !
     
  4. MissPoetik

    MissPoetik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmm... hmmm... hmmm...

    [email protected].. you had me going with that one! great piece!:hot:
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    not only are you my hero

    you are a true playa

    feeling the skill and precision

    fella

    DSS
     
  6. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that's what I've missed

    "I want to find my way so deep into
    you that i escape through your
    skin
    shed you into another
    experience
    of
    muscle fibers contracting
    and bodies sinking
    into another day"



    good gosh!!!!!!




    One
     
  7. Ladysoul

    Ladysoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was too good and the imagery is amazing! Well done!!!
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dayummm, blak! tyght! and that's all i can say about that! that's what i love about your pieces....
     
  9. elayne.

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    garrison.


    well... oh my ****!! :D

    it's been a minute since you've allowed us
    to enjoy one of your BLakErotic pieces... &
    i for one am a VERY appreciative sistah right
    about now!! :lol: thank ya! you still dha
    man! ...you know that right??

    itsallLove,
    elayne.
     
  10. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    verb, i thought that this piece was so sensual, yet so sweet, i was totally feeling this...i mean, i FELT this. Like whoa.
     
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