Poetry Critiques : I WANT TO BE KNOWN PT.1 N 2

sheikdadon

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D@MN I WANNA BE KNOWN
KNOWN AS A HOT @** POET
SO I GOTTA CHURN OUT HOTNESS
CONSISTENT HOT S*** DAT SHOWS
THE STRENGTH N MY LYRICAL PROWESS
I WANT MY BARS N HOOKS
TO STRIKE LIKE THIEVES N CROOKS
I WANT MY RHYMES TO SEDUCE YA EARS
I NEED MY NAME TO LIVE ON BEYOND MY PHYSICAL YEARS
WHO KNOWS MAYBE THEY'LL CONSTRUCT MY CLONE
IT'S ALL GOOD CUZ EVEN IN DA FUTURE ILL BE KNOWN...

I WANNA BE KNOWN AS DAT FREAK B****
DA CHICK TAKIN ALL DA HOES AWAY FROM U D****
SO I GOTTA WORK EXTRA HARD WHEN IM DIGGIN IT OUT
BUT ITS NOT A PROBLEM ONE TOUCH N THEY BEGN ME 2 EAT IT OUT
I DONT CARE HOW MUCH SHE BEG NO IM NOT GONNA TAKE IT OUT
IM STROKIN ALL THREE HOLES LIKE A PRO
I BETCHA IN DA MORNING BY ALL HER FRIENDS ILL BE KNOWN...
 

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