Poetry Critiques : I WANT TO BE KNOWN PT.1 N 2

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    [email protected] I WANNA BE KNOWN
    KNOWN AS A HOT @** POET
    SO I GOTTA CHURN OUT HOTNESS
    CONSISTENT HOT S*** DAT SHOWS
    THE STRENGTH N MY LYRICAL PROWESS
    I WANT MY BARS N HOOKS
    TO STRIKE LIKE THIEVES N CROOKS
    I WANT MY RHYMES TO SEDUCE YA EARS
    I NEED MY NAME TO LIVE ON BEYOND MY PHYSICAL YEARS
    WHO KNOWS MAYBE THEY'LL CONSTRUCT MY CLONE
    IT'S ALL GOOD CUZ EVEN IN DA FUTURE ILL BE KNOWN...

    I WANNA BE KNOWN AS DAT FREAK B****
    DA CHICK TAKIN ALL DA HOES AWAY FROM U D****
    SO I GOTTA WORK EXTRA HARD WHEN IM DIGGIN IT OUT
    BUT ITS NOT A PROBLEM ONE TOUCH N THEY BEGN ME 2 EAT IT OUT
    I DONT CARE HOW MUCH SHE BEG NO IM NOT GONNA TAKE IT OUT
    IM STROKIN ALL THREE HOLES LIKE A PRO
    I BETCHA IN DA MORNING BY ALL HER FRIENDS ILL BE KNOWN...
     
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