Black Poetry : I Want to Be Kissed

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by FattnBeautiful, Feb 2, 2008.

  1. FattnBeautiful

    FattnBeautiful Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I want to be kissed.
    I want to be kissed with passion
    tingling with love, lust and desire
    I want to be kissed like I am the air you breath and I am your oxygen

    I want to be kissed
    I want to be engulfed in your arms
    I want your fingers lost in my thick black hair
    gripping it tight, hold in on to me with dear life
    holding on to me as if I will disappear right before your eyes

    I want to be kissed
    I want to feel your lips pressed against mine
    I want to melt into your mouth
    I want to feel your tongue on mine
    moving it in and out and around my mouth
    I want to nibble and suck on your bottom lip
    I want to hear you moan and feel you squirm

    I want to be kissed
    I want to be kissed as I close my eyes and clear my mind
    I want no distractions
    I want all my attention on you, on us, on this kiss

    I want to be kissed
    I want to be taken away and lose all sense of time
    I want to be kissed and get lost in the movements of our mouths
    I want to feel your eagerness and I want you to feel mine
    I want to revel in the taste and the feel of your lips

    I want to be kissed
    I want to be kissed as if you want to be saved
    and my lips are your salvation

    I want to be kissed
    I want to be kissed slowly and sensually
    I want to savor every second, every minute
    I want to feel your heart beat against mine
    I want to be kissed so good I feel like I want to cry
    I want to allow those tears to flow down my eyes
    I want you to cradle my face in your hands gentle and delicately

    I want to be kissed
    I want to be kissed to the point where you leave me breathless
    To where you have my body weak
    and you have to hold me closer to your body
    so I don't fall to the floor
    To where you have me practically begging you
    for more and more and more

    I want to be kissed
    I want to be kissed like I have never been kissed before
    I want, I need, I crave to be kissed by you.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I want to kiis u completely
    deep sweet and tenderly
    as i take grasp to ya body
    I wanna kiss u compassionately
    wit a bliss of unknown
    so u know i'm there
    I wanna kiss u eroticly
    to a point ya body moist up
    and your moans rise to it's peak
    I wanna kiss u
    like a tropical rain forrest
    to where u feel safe in my motion
    I wanna kiss u all night long
    feel da stroke of my tongue swirling
    deep in depth of my love
    I wanna just kiss u now !
     
  3. Tha-Emissary

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    We definitely get the point. Great Write, but I don't think you just want to be kissed from the looks of it you want to be Savored Sista! This is outright Poignant Poetic Passion to the fullest & Keep Spilling your love out tha pen!
     
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    Thank you Rich and Tha-Emissary for your wonderful comments. I always appriciate them.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi FattnBeautiful
    Wonderful! Wow!
    It is so grant how one kiss
    can fire up so many wonderful
    emotions. Keep bringing it sis
    Much Love

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Agreeing with Tha-Emissary, it seems you want to be savored, so that one can fully sppreciate you. Your word choice was vibrant. Expressive write.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    i ain't mad at cha

    play on
     
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    I think I can safely say that we all do/did or have related to our wants, great piece poet :toasts:
     
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    Kisses upon kisses

    Upon more and

    more...

    KISSES
     
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