Black Poetry : I want that kinda love...

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  1. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I want that kinda love...
    that is fireproof and built to last
    that can stand the test of time
    you know the kind of love the elders had
    still holding hands when we are sixty
    and rocking on the porch at eighty

    I want that kinda love...
    that makes my bones shiver & my heart smile
    at the mere mention of your name
    that my knees shake and my soul overflows
    with just the slighest glance from you
    that your presence simply transforms me

    I want that kinda love...
    where every day with you is sweeter
    where my past was setup for our accquaintance
    Where every trail and tribulation was worth it
    For it all led up to the climax that is you and I

    I want that kinda love...
    that has no prior precedent or comparsion
    that transcend explanations and words
    that poets have tried to detail for centuries
    that true R & B ballads are filled with

    I want that kinda love...
    that many dream of but only soulmates have
    where it feels as if God made me just for you
    where I am perfect fit for your missing rib
    where we complement each other in every way

    I want that kinda love....
    and nothing us will do
    So I wait patiently to meet you
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Ooo-wee! I tell ya, all tis LOVE is just warming up the ROOM! (lol)


    I enjoyed this, Sister ASP! :toast:

    THIS was my FAVORITE part:

    I gotta quote Sister Coco on this one....That's "SOUL DEEP!"
     
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    Sounds like an awesome kinda love!

    A beautiful write!


    feelin'itsouldeep!
    Coco:dance:
     
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    That's a beautiful kinda love to feel ...wha's even better is:
    "Having him sitting somewhere feeling the same way" ...w0w, with both wanting to be loved that way, will surely start a forest fire :flame:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dat's da kinda love i'm talkin bout this was like heaven made on earth......
     
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    Clyde C Coger Jr going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    In the Spirit of Sankofa and Truth!

    I want that kinda love......You ain't alone




    asimplepoet,

    Me too!:)...This is completely over the top my sister friend:

    where it feels as if God made me just for you



     
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