Black Poetry : I want re evolution with you (a love thang)

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    queen listen
    i don't want no
    trinkets of love i
    can buy them down at
    the five and dime
    i want a love present
    that's too big to fit the sky

    i don't want no steam
    or a mild mist of your L
    O
    ...V
    .........E
    i want you to rain on me
    not a summer sprinkle but
    a monsoon
    a hurricane named
    Y....O....U
    the worries are not necessary
    this brother won't be boarding
    up the windows to his home so
    come
    on in

    i don't want no
    dangling participle
    no fragmented sentence
    no double negatives
    no broken blak english
    i want a paragraph of
    you
    that's all positive
    "dat's right"

    i don't want no
    "Sound of Music" exclamation
    i want you
    then i'll go tell it on the mountain
    like it T-I iz
    with no preservatives
    cause the kind of love I got
    don't rot

    i want a soul brother loving
    "our"story hugging
    "our"ticulate speaking
    kool aid drinking

    blak woman

    can you dig?
    and if you can dig, it be
    what....
    it be dug
    and we'll gaze at each other
    while sipping us and laying on
    love's rug before the fire of
    re
    evolution.

    (C)2001 blakverb
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    verb

    ya gonna make it wet round here !!:D
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bro $$RICH$$

    it's too late for that. you've beat me to it. no doubt. thanks blakman.

    blak
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bro Blak!!!!

    I have truly missed your scribes!!!!

    This here is it!!!!!

    Peace/
    GQ
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My ROYAL BLaK-NeSs


    now... you know me! so you know I had to
    come in on this!! :lol: has any one eva just
    happened to mention to you the way that
    you NEVER disappoint?? have they eve just
    come ryght out & told ya how you continuous-ly
    amaze? (& the MOST amazing thing is that
    you do it without even tryin! ****!!) :confused:

    OneLuvBlakMan.
    Ga~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    verb man u be off da hook
    but ya gonna make it like a river running
    wit love juices...........:D
     
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