Black Poetry : I Want Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by BlackPeach, Sep 5, 2003.

  1. BlackPeach

    BlackPeach New Member MEMBER

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    Hi everyone this is my first post please be gentle:

    I want love
    you know that foot stomping
    knee slapping, shouting in church kinda love
    That I'll follow you to your room
    to the ends of the world type of love
    That wake up with nothing but them on your mind type of love
    That you want me and i know i want you kinda love
    That Sh*T that starts of as puppy love kinda Love
    Soul consuming mind distorting Love
    That My mama, My daddy dont know type of love
    Heart wrenching soul crushing type of love
    That if you leave me I might die type of love
    What happened to that love
    Now its all about F**K me S**K me
    who cares about love kinda love
    **** what happened to that love
    I want love
     
  2. SUNkissed

    SUNkissed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WELCOME!

    :toast: .Welcome...Welcome!!

    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
    you will love it here... there is a GREAT vibe..POSITIVITY in abundance



    I like your style...
    easy to understand and relate to... (snaps)
    keep it FLOWIN!!:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the family of love & bond
    welcome from above as i bless u some love
    BlackPeach.....it's an honor to have u upon us
    to sho ya craft and share poetic wisdom

    we try not to use and flow with much profanity
    as we try to keep our community clean and respectful
    but wow!:) so happy u join us please look around get
    ya groove on and enjoy ya kin now welcome:D
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  4. PoeticThoughts

    PoeticThoughts Member MEMBER

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    I like ur poem a lot and I feel u cuz I need love to..I need some real love just like u
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WELCOME! :toast:
     
  6. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    omg! OMG! I like u already! This is exactly how I feel, giiiiiiiiiirrrrrll ur my new found friend...lol.
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :(poet, what about me:cry:............

    :wave::wave::wave:

    Welcome to our family!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    p.s..I was just kidding with her
     
  8. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome..... to the family......

    This poem was tyte to the extreme.... s**t, I want that kind of love, too......
     
  9. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Get yourself that love. Asking will get you everything.
    Nice poem. Welcome to Destee.
     
  10. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl...i feel like this every single day. You read my mind. Lot's of love. A beautiful well put piece. And welcome!
     
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