Black Poetry : I Wanna !

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I just wanna be free
    from da pain and misery
    exscape da stain of thee streets
    from what is hurtin me
    i wanna be free
    where there's no stress
    feel da comfort and da caress
    taste da love of confess
    shown in da morrow test

    I wanna live beyond my stage
    free from da silent rage
    where my soul no longer cage
    as my quill leak upon da page
    express da freely will of pledge
    i wanna be free openly
    pass what has labled me
    held me back unfaithfully
    i wanna be free free freeeee!!!!

    I gotta get pass this thing
    that life has toss and inspring
    and stop da sad song i sing
    uplift my voice i bring
    wit ink of quill i sting
    da truth of freedom dat ring
    surely u know what i mean

    I wanna be free outside da dream
    far from da nightly soft hollow scream
    and close to what my heart cling
    da love my embeded life seen
    has been only a stumble bloc fling
    we together can be a team
    once i release this bling
    to be free free free from everything

    lifting my voice and ink wit sheen
    working my mental wit da eye so keen
    i wanna be free'd inside yo ember string
    of fire & desirable cream
    of love freedom brings
    .........free me !
    from da sadness of livin things
    .........free me !
    away far away from da misery
    .........free me !
    I wanna .........
    be
    freeeeeeeeeeee

    :SuN018:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Freedom from the evil in our lives, the chaos that holds us and binds us. Yes poet, I know what you mean. This piece was most definitely, felt.
     
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    Keita Kenyatta going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    I'M NOT TOUCHIN THIS!! GREAT WORK...BUT THEN AGAIN...WHEN ISN'T IT GREAT?
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yea we ain't free

    we are products of the system

    and it's not all bad no we're not saying that

    we're saying people shouldn't have to compromise their inner being

    their spirit for the sake of stupidity

    great piece here $$RICH$$

    and we will be free one day

    free from this choke hold


    peace
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$:
    Feeln' this piece oh so deep.
    Great Write!


    Much Luv
     
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    truetothecause Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ya know I'm vibing wit dis Flow!!!!

    Way to Go:SuN018:

    I just wanna be free
    to be ME
    dont' care if the world see
    I just wanna be free!
     
  7. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank u watz yes feeling da depth to be free from da mist of these chaos
    will be the great release to thy mind and soul.

    thank u brother Keita it was an upcoming expression of what is and the truth

    sho ya right So'ja man u hit the key points big ups bruh !

    thankz 4EVERLUV just thank u sweetie

    thank u sista truetothecause surely someday we will be free to be who we are
    as we are and free from da stress laid upon us daily from da walls of these systems
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for bringing out this poem. To be free is a fight worth fighting and once you are free it is a fight well fought. I loved this piece, in all it's entirety. Thanks for reppin da spot.

    D.S.
     
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    most welcome DS we all in it together to uplift ourselves into freedom mentally
     
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