Black Poetry : I wanna

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by THA HOOKUPMAN, Sep 8, 2004.

  1. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    When I become confused,
    i settle into wordplay
    the most beautiful things serenade my soul.
    I feel like an innocent child
    gleefully discovering the certainties
    of living carefree.
    Automatically,
    I wanna cuddle
    in grammatical chemistry
    and let it comfort, caress,
    consume and console me.

    I wanna lay next to
    devastating diction
    and let it breathe softly on my neck
    and whisper sweet things
    then smile about it in my dreams.
    I wanna dance with
    dramatic syllabic songs
    and feel all the emotions
    running through them.

    I wanna strip naked
    and hear spoken word harmony
    Charming me
    and dis-arming thee
    strength I posses
    and let
    each and every word
    baptize my being
    and cleanse my soul like water

    I wanna let those wise words tickle my body
    like soft pieces of cotton
    and tease me with tantalizing touches
    that perform mind sex
    and voodoo hex
    me from head to toe.
    Cause words
    are wind soft aloft clouds
    like Sweet sage
    gen-u-wine
    amidst the sunshine
    Clever daffodils
    that cast spells
    at will
    ...and through them

    I see the science of hieroglyphics
    Decipher all ancient mysteries
    Learn of all things important
    and intricate

    Make love to my mind
    cause
    im a word warrior
    syllable soldier
    lyrical enforcer
    Transform all
    with traditional
    Griotic telepathy

    for my muse ..she knows who she is :angel1:

    hookup :bazooka: :hot:
     
  2. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    i mean hookman..i feel like
    the antonym...the opposite of your muse..
    yet here i am again...to say i'm stepping in between again
    shouting about your rhythm and your mind..
    your creative sounds of verbs and nouns..
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To find a muse who forces one to express oneself in a constant stream of poetic melodies...what an amazing place to find oneself in.
     
  4. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dang this was nice very smooth flowing well let me drop this right here

    Like students use the library then amuse the secretary//
    With big words seeing crazy and being lazy// carry
    A price in life hard to get a job and be involved
    Pride have grown tall like a stonewall// my bricks are sick
    Stick frequent cement in my lyric, foundation is thick
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man if she don't know by now she felt the vibe off dis
    very smoothly pose'd love how u spelled it out to her
    yes indeed flow on bruh !
     
  6. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...Again, I am awe struck

    and yes...she knows :wink:

    I'm truly speechless...I mean really

    This work of art...was reminiscent of

    my favorite modern art movements...

    in the formation of word...

    Such as Impressionism, Expressionism, Art Nouveau

    and yet...these artists who set the stage

    for each of these...are paled by comparison

    Thanks for illuminating my heart and soul

    with your words...I'm all aglow, Sage... :spinstar: :heart:
     
  7. Ireadastory

    Ireadastory Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well ...ummmmmmmmmmmmmm dang!...........I am speechless. B-EA-U-TI-FUL flow!
     
  8. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "grammatical Chemistry"
    Mmmm I can dig that brotha...
    but of course thahookupman ALWAYS HOOKS IT UP when ya flow
     
  9. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    back to the top...
    for our poet of the week
    to shine... :toast:
     
  10. gempis

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    I am awed by this drop - what a beautiful dimension you take us into. Truly, poet of the week.
     
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