Black Poetry : I Wanna Seduce You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sarcasm4eva, Jan 3, 2004.

  1. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 19, 2003
    Messages:
    593
    Likes Received:
    17
    Gender:
    Female
    Ratings:
    +17
    this is my attempt at spitting freaky words, so let me know what y'all think and if i went over board.if i did, my apologies in advance.ok here goes.


    I want pt. 2 of that day I was on top.
    U were workin my hips....
    And I was jerkin ur d*&~
    Don't deny it, the moans of pleasure
    Were.....
    Escaping both of our lips.
    I think destiny told us we had to get down like this.
    Tender velvet kisses hittin ur spot.....
    Da@~ u should've said my name.....
    U know my kitty kat woulda been really hot.
    Rubbin my back....
    Sendin me straight to the starz,
    From where I was at, I couldn't see Mars.
    Wait...wait....Wait!
    I'm supposed to be seducing you.
    Let me get re-acquainted w/ur chest....
    My tongue travels down 2 ur navel....
    Makin its own twirl fest.
    What's this I hear?
    You can't handle this....
    Back to those sexy *** lips.
    Ticklin u in ur spot....
    Which causes that sexy a** smile to appear.
    Da#%, I shouldn't have gone there.
    Now I can't resist...
    U r lickin ur lips....
    Now I'm thinkin...
    Oh sh&!
    I know u wanna lick me from head to toe.
    Da@! I can't front. U know i want this.
    That 1st nite u put ur tongue 2 work.....
    I think thats how I became addicted
    To
    U
    Or was it ur lickin fest?
    Who really seduced who?
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jun 11, 2003
    Messages:
    6,008
    Likes Received:
    44
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Praising The Lord
    Location:
    Baltimore, MD
    Ratings:
    +44
    ahplay time...nice vibe on this drop...:)
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Oct 4, 2003
    Messages:
    16,340
    Likes Received:
    114
    Location:
    Northeast
    Ratings:
    +122
    Well, that woke me up...This was one hot scribe.
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    erotic vibes flowin wit passion
    flow on
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Aug 26, 2003
    Messages:
    12,660
    Likes Received:
    191
    Location:
    somewhere ova da rainbow....
    Ratings:
    +219
    spicy drop
    flow on....
     
  6. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    May 30, 2003
    Messages:
    5,322
    Likes Received:
    38
    Location:
    ~The hidden library...~
    Ratings:
    +39
    I'm with Mzblkangel....this was def' spicy
     
  7. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Nov 26, 2002
    Messages:
    1,601
    Likes Received:
    14
    Location:
    Rocky Mountains, High
    Ratings:
    +14
    Hmmmmm...

    Where's my vaseline.

    No doubt, this was scorching.
     
  8. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 26, 2003
    Messages:
    10,784
    Likes Received:
    4,235
    Gender:
    Male
    Ratings:
    +4,472
    spicy indeed...
    glad to see you back gurl...
    one love
    khasm
     
  9. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 19, 2003
    Messages:
    593
    Likes Received:
    17
    Gender:
    Female
    Ratings:
    +17
    thanx for all the love fam. lol at positivemindset. it feels good to be back khasm. thought i'd try something new. much love to ya fam :)
     
  10. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jan 8, 2002
    Messages:
    292
    Likes Received:
    0
    Occupation:
    Postal worker
    Location:
    Atlanta, GA (that dirty!!)
    Ratings:
    +0
    You go girl!!!! Too hot. I enjoyed this!
    Keep the pen flowing, ya got skillz ma!
     
Loading...