Black Poetry : i wanna love you...like that (inspired by coco's "loved...like that")

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  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I Want To Love You…Like That

    I want to Love you
    Completely
    Openly
    The way a woman needs to be
    ~ Loved

    I want to love you
    In such a way that
    Everyday
    Brings joy to the things you say
    And yesterday
    Was just the beginning of
    Another day
    Of being in love with you
    …That way

    I want to love you
    Without the fantasy-colored lenses
    And all the pretenses
    That fairytales
    Can bring
    From summer’s fall
    ‘Til winter’s spring
    When even the leaves greenery
    Speaks to me

    I want to enhance tomorrow
    With you in my life
    When given a chance
    I want to romance you
    Completely

    ~ Yes…

    I want to love the beautiful woman in you
    As well as the roaring lioness

    ~ I do.

    May I love you beyond measure
    …Beyond your dreams

    May I give you a life to treasure
    And all the womanly pleasures
    A good woman needs

    May I be your rising sun
    …Your shining star
    Coz…wherever you are
    That’s where I want to be

    Even…
    When you don’t feel like doing
    The womanly things
    To do
    Or
    Pursuing
    All the fun things
    I want you to

    ~ Yes…

    I would still love you…like that
    Through all the momentary things
    Like the somber mood swings
    And the not-so-perfect things
    That’s
    In you

    I would love you…Enough
    To endure the bad times…And stuff
    Through all the arguments…We’ll have
    And the irritations…We’ll share
    And all the small things…We do
    We’d endure it all, coz…I love you

    ~ Yes …

    I want to be
    That shining star
    That rising sun
    The fun that brings tomorrow in
    Your best lover…and most wondrous friend
    And everything that comes with being
    …Your man

    If I can

    I want to love you

    Soul

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    Like

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  2. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow I want someone to love me just like that. To say I love this would be an understatement. Wow is all I can say.
     
  3. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Mr Baller Man...

    You do know that I love what you do with words, right?
    You gonna have a Sista making a Mississippi road trip:wink: Naw, on the real...:)
    this is an amazingly-super-awesome write! And absolutely thrilling for me to know
    I planted a small seed that you nurtured and blossomed into this lovely piece of poetry.
    You are truly an incredible talent! Bravo Baller, Bravo!!!:toast:

    Feelin’itsouldeep!
    Coco:dance:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what a lovely piece this was u marked the L on love
     
  5. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    *swoon!*

    I agree w/Sister Coco!....This here kinda pretty words will gitcha stalked! (lol)

    This was AMAZINGLY beautiful, Bro Baller! :bowdown:

    With loving like THAT, any woman who LOOKS too hard at cha man just might git CUT! (lol)

    And, LADIES:
    If you're gettin' loving like THAT......KEEP YA MOUTH SHUT!
    DON'T BE TELLIN' ERR-BODY!



    Bro Baller, THAT kinda mental, emotional, and physical lovin' is some "DR FEELGOOD" kinda lovin'!



     
  6. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    okay...okay...

    now...does that mean that y'all be feeling the flow of this hea piece? THANK YOU so much for the wonderful comments...and the love you show. THAT'S why i love this site. we treat each other so NICELY...and we make each other feel at home. THANK YOU.

    coco...you know it's 'bout time we did one of our patented fusions.:) THANKS FOR THE INSPIRATION.

    the river floweth.
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Yes, we kinda liked it just a teensy-weenie, wittle bit. :em2300:
     
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    You made me heart smile with this poem :) :heart:
     
  9. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "patented fusions" I likes that. Its a poetic date. And as far as "THE INSPIRATION" it was my pleasure.


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    Awesome kinda love, it's a relating kinda of wonderful love that I know for a fact do happens, that's a fact, a natural fact!! I feel that love daily.
    Great piece of work Brother Baller!!
     
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