Black Poetry : I wanna Be

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by THEONE, Sep 21, 2005.

  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wanna be imbedded in your very essence
    Like Bold Face words typed on white paper
    I wanna ride your emotional ups and Downs
    Like A kid on a roller coaster
    Afraid, Yet Daring, Ready to Take them on
    I wanna Know you inside and out
    I wanna treat your thoughts as my home
    I wanna touch you physically and mentally
    Massaging your body and mind
    Feel you out, find out things
    about you that you never new exist
    I wanna tell you when you have a new beauty mark
    Be the mentally urge that forces you to stop or start
    I wanna be one with you as if I looked in the mirror
    When the reflection shows you
    I"ll know the picture couldn't be clearer!
    I wanna be your sugar
    Tempting that sweet tooth
    Cause I know you got it
    I wanna make plans for you
    Cause I know your habits
    I wanna finish your sentences
    Before you know what's next
    Hey Ill pick out your clothes
    Cause I know how you like to dress
    I wanna be the only one who
    Really gets you wet
    Even when others attempt
    I have no problem
    Cause I know exactly what it takes
    I wanna know at the end of every night
    You rest easy, think enlightenment and smile
    I wanna know, you know
    Your man enjoys the job he has
    And is willing to go that extra mile!

    Lj
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nothing like i wanna be deep
    in the glist of her soul and
    fulfill her desires of bliss
    surely nothing like being and
    caressing da orbs of her extremeness

    man this was phat and heated ya pen blazing red hot !!!
     
  3. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice flow fron Da ONE! :dance:
     
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    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww! this is beautiful THEONE!!!

    too cute... honest. :luv: :luv: :luv: :couple:
     
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    peace,

    nicely written scribe............
     
  6. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Fam For the Read
     
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    Inque Active Member MEMBER

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    The imagery here is wonderful, emphasizes the emotion wonderfully. Lovely...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seems like you're ready to go that extra mile for your lady and then some. I particularly liked those first 2 lines:
    "I wanna be imbedded in your very essence
    Like Bold Face words typed on white paper"
    Flow on brotha.
     
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