Black Poetry : i wanna be with you...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by baller, Aug 16, 2002.

  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ‘Twas easy to see
    the inner glow of you
    STRUNG OUT
    Over OCEANS & GULFs
    Of poetic emotions
    {as though drowning in a sea of you}

    As I admired
    Each
    Delicious
    Stride
    Of
    YOU
    Your caramel hue
    Caught my eye

    So CAUGHT UP
    Was I
    In the growing scent
    Of femininity
    That its magnetism had me
    In its grasp
    Before I could
    React
    To you

    “GOOD EVENING”
    Was all I could say
    As I silently
    “my FATHER…help me”
    PRAYED
    That I might come to know
    The wiles of you

    I hope you don’t think
    I’m moving too fast
    …that my forward
    BEHAVIOR
    Is but a last ditch effort
    To get next to you

    IT IS

    Any who

    I just wanted you to know
    I wanna be with you.:)
     
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    sraheem2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HA HAAA, Bro... digging it!

    thanks

    Saleem
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Baller Baller Baller !!! man sho her and if she read dis she will
    know how ya wanna spend ya time ........tyght flow bru
     
  4. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    raheem/$$RICH$$...THANKS for the love...just trying to get the point across.:)
     
  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Any who"
    This is a cute piece. :)

    Scribeaboutit! It helps.
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  6. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i.b.


    as usual... you took me there. :)

    your words always pull me in(to) them...
    no matter what you're writing about.
    thank you for that!!

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
  7. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice piece Baller.
    Hope that you receive what/whom you desire.
    Tyte flow
    *Emma*
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love it, Baller! Thank you!

    alyce
     
  9. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    she's coming around.:)

    THANKS for reading.
     
  10. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh

    **** that was tyght Baller!!! From beginning to completion im lovin it!

    Reas
     
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