Black Poetry : i wanna be with you...

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  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I Wanna Be With You

    ‘Twas easy to see
    The inner glow of you
    STRUNG OUT over
    OCEANS AND GULFs
    Of poetic emotions

    ~ As if drowning in a sea of you ~

    As I admired
    Each
    Delicious
    Stride
    Of
    YOU
    Your caramel hue
    Caught my eye

    So CAUGHT UP
    Was I
    In the growing scent of femininity
    That its magnetism had me in its grasp
    Before I could
    REACT
    To you

    “HELLO”
    Was all I could say
    As I silently
    “My FATHER…help me”
    PRAYED
    That I might come to know the wiles of you

    May I
    Nestle
    Between
    Open THIGHS
    Where sensitive petals lie

    May I
    Journey into the depths of
    UNFORGETABLE splendor
    …Feel the give-and-take
    Of the sweet release of
    Moaning
    Sighing
    Skin-smack-soulful dancing
    Thrice visiting
    Hidden caverns of ecstasy
    Dripping with milk and honey

    ~ I stand ~

    Doused in the smell of love’s scent
    …The touch of silky softness about your skin
    Languishing in the aftermath of
    A radiant glow
    Where pleasures abound
    And virginity lives
    No mo’

    I hear you sighing
    “Thousand year old,” crying(s)
    As “why” washes over you
    And all the things you’ve ever wanted to do
    You do them…with me

    Yesterday told me
    What tomorrow has in store…
    …for me
    And everyday following
    Will bring another surprise for you…to see
    If only you’d open your inner door…for me
    Allow me into the core of you
    Love me ‘til you’re sore…for me

    ~ I know that’s bold of me ~

    Everyday I look at you
    Finds me
    Lusting over the
    Bee…bop…and boo of you
    Hoping to
    Engulf your presence
    As the essence of you
    Drapes my soul in its freshness

    I long to
    Caress you into tomorrow
    That I might hold you in forever(ness)

    I want to look into hazel eyes
    That cries silent tears of
    “take me, please,”
    As I ease
    The innocence from your
    Closed—and locked—knees
    And feel resistance fade away

    I can’t wait to get next to you
    …To taste nature’s dew of you

    I want to
    Nibble on your inner thighs
    As I listen to your cries of
    “Please, don’t leave me like this.”
    As I kiss
    The smiling center of you

    I have observed the gentle sweetness
    Of your grace

    Your hazel eyes
    And luscious lips
    They talk to me
    …Telling me all the things
    Your mind refuses to say
    Everyday
    I look at you

    I want to be with you

    I want to hold…and caress…and touch…and tease you
    And tell you all the ways I can please you

    ~ Then…show you ~

    But…being that you’re married
    I guess that’s out of the question…

    Huh!​
     
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    well now ......seem like blaze of warmth instill in da beauty of her glow
    I guess so less a big change this joint was mad tyte as i was invisioning it all
    in my mind what if and what could be .....love this piece kinda hit home
     
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    In an attempt to pull myself together I must say.....

    baller…baller….baller…..

    Now you know when you can make a sista
    Say your name repeatedly you are really doing something.

    I had to pull myself from underneath your pen
    as I became oh so lost within. The passion, desire & tenderness
    that flowz through this write is almost unimaginable…
    I say "almost" because…..
    You took me back there….and I say "back" because
    I have been there….what a shame.....what same...(smh)
    When you can’t follow through with feelings of this magnitude.

    BEAUTIFULLY POSED:bowdown:


    Much Luv
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I must say, I didn't expect that ending at all, I was waiting for, at least the beginning stages of a romantic tryst, since you set the stage for it, oh, so well. Quite an alluring write, masterfully penned.
     
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    Lataisha Nicole Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful write, I found myself melting into ecstasy, falling into this sea of hot and sweaty and sticky and soft and hard and oh my...how the ending brought me back to reality, Not going there. Loved your expressions poet Write on! Write on!
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NOW, SEE...

    the forbidden has its...well, i won't go there.:) THANKS for reading.

    let the river flow.
     
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    speechless yes I'm speechless:SuN033:
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Ooooooh-weee!



    Just keep on doing whatchu do cuz you do it so well!

    This made me wanna shake yo' hand!
     
  9. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    allow me to THANK both of you...

    ...for feeling me...on...this...pEaCe.:) the ins and outs of intimate attractions are wonderful to watch...as they unfold. IF YOU GOTTA BE ADDICTED TO SOMETHING...IT SHOULD FEEL THIS GOOD.:)
     
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