Black Poetry : I Wanna Be With You...

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  1. MzMelanie2u2

    MzMelanie2u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (sniff-sniff)…Oh My Goodness…! He must be near….
    For its his scent that I’m smellin and that i hold so dear…
    Its funny how I can identify you but still not know your name…
    the way I’m just a fiend for you, Lord knows its shame…
    With that smile so-cunning and those eyes that are just mind blowing…
    I feel your character and I feel your place…
    And I know I wanna be with you…
    You walk through these halls as if you own it all…
    You unknowingly stop all commotion and take control of every situation…
    When you enter through that door, I stand at attention inside…
    My heart and souls begins to swell with pride…
    For I feel your style and I feel your grace…
    And I know I wanna be with you...
    But I wonder if you know I’m here…
    Watching your every move…
    I know that I’m just one of many…
    But please tell me is there any…
    Chance of me getting next to you…
    Cuz boy, I wanna be with you…
    :kiss1: :hearts2: :kiss1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was very nice love the warmness and passion flow
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yea, crushes can be just that way. Very endearing piece.
     
  4. Ladysoul

    Ladysoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I liked this a lot...brought back a few memories
     
  5. mahoganyqueen

    mahoganyqueen Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was nice. I read this and remembered the feeling of butterflies when that certain someone looked at me in that certain way. :welldone:
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was sweet and smooth enjoyed the flow
     
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    sahara heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww, this was sweet. scoot up and get close to him gurl! LOL. nice write!
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awww, this was too cute. I remember when i was writing these types of poems......last week (*wink*).....I liked this. Props given.
     
  9. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Staccato of Secret Admiration...

    There is nothing more riveting...

    Loving it!
    Sage
     
  10. hisili

    hisili Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwe gurl u kno I love it when u write bout me...
    lol lemme stop still mad luv for this drop lyk alwayz
     
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