Black Poetry : I wait for you. Patiently.

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  1. PisceanStorm

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    There’s a soft echoes from the mountain coming from the west.
    Feeling this undying desire to see you once again.
    I wait for you. Patiently.

    A melody plays on the leaves that dances before me..
    Knowing you are near. Knowing you are not far away yes.
    I wait for you. Patiently

    Adenine elevated to a glee of cool jazz
    Brass horn, and tambourine keeps the beat of my fiery heart
    I wait for you. Patiently

    Perspiration dripping from my brow is cooled by the air
    This consciousness that have been bottle up for so long. Waits just for you.
    Patiently.
     
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    Wait unto thee for i cometh in da garment of love
    script in damask of hope and comfort
    as one wait patiently

    Each melody whisper a note in da winds
    that i am near as da great horns blow and trumpits sound
    it wil be da heart of my exsitance patiently

    As da hour close upon da day ye wait is less
    for if one look above each cloud form me
    da breeze is my unconditional touch

    Like rain drops kissin thee is my moist lips
    patiently and compassionately so worth to partake in
    wait for me like summer eve and nighten-gal.

    Awesome scribe I couldn't help myself wow........ya pen stroking
    like a blaze of fire so sweet, do continue !
     
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    Thank you $$RICH$$ you really open up the essence of my poem even more.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome ...........and thank you for allowing me into your space
     
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    i think waiting is so much better thanks for sharing your gift........
     
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