Black Poetry : I UTTERED DA WORDS

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by BaduX, Sep 14, 2003.

  1. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I WANT TO TELL YOU SOMETHING.
    SOMETHING I'VE BEEN MEANIN TO TELL YOU,
    "I...."

    WILL U LET ME GET IT OUT!
    YES, THATS NICE,
    BUT WOULD YOU
    LET ME FINISH.
    "I L...."

    DAM
    YES....BUT I REALLY WANT
    TO TELL YOU....
    WHAT...BUT YOU CAN'T LEAVE

    HOW DO I KNOW YOU WILL
    BE BACK.
    BUT JUST LET....OKAY...BYE!!!
    WHY DID I LET HIM GO,

    DAM....I SHOULD HAVE TOLD HIM
    I LOVE YOU!!!!:love:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime we have to just say it
    coz sometime theirs a no return
    love this meaningful piece
     
  3. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so nicely written...i'm feeling this one. much love
     
  4. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    interesting, very interesting... I like it!
     
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