Black Poetry : I used to be

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PoeticManifesta, Oct 16, 2005.

  1. PoeticManifesta

    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I used to be diva of this
    lyrical language shh..

    Had words n phrases
    Busta Rhymes couldnt get,

    Had a new poem every day of the week,
    Life was so bad,
    i didnt want to get up to eat,


    Yea, they call me P.M.S,
    Cause a man did it to me,
    Now i feel as though im begging to be hurt,
    So i can set my inner poet free..

    She dosent like to be locked up,
    Shes pizsed off and mad,
    You havent seen P.M.S on this street?
    so you better be glad.

    Cause she will lock up your rhymes,
    Have you thinkin about
    hittin that "edit" button just 1 more time,

    My Poetry hasnt Manifested itsself
    in a long ol'time.
    BUt just be prepared,
    when comes the time.

    Cause ill steal your verses,
    lock em up,
    in iambic pentameter,
    and make you simile..
    at me.. lol.

    Just wanted to make it a fact,
    that my reps intact,
    Cause when P.M.S gets back,
    shes gunna cause a lyrical blasphemy,
    And i dont want yall runnin round,
    mad at me!




    This has Been a P.M.S
    Production..
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whewwwwwwww!!
    poetic PMS ....this was tyte drop sis
     
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    black_soul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop can't wait to read more.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and again
    you are so full of energy
    i feel so much victory in your poems
    a challenge to all who face you

    Peace Unto You
     
  5. ibrahim

    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    right! keep it flowing
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice write really enjoyed this
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was cute...

    put it down lil sista
    we'll be lookin for the fiyah
    as it falls from your poetic sky

    do ya thang
     
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    KaNvaZ Member MEMBER

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    very ill drop, sister poetic....I am definitely feeling it.
     
  9. Lloyd

    Lloyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If i were a pimp and u was one of my girls,surely u'll have the keys of my ranch!!!
    I just wanna say that some words may be hard to let come out but u r so courageous!!I like ur piece because its raw though deep n right in a beautiful way.
    Thats why...i give the 'gold heart' to LADYYYYYY POETICMANIFESTAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!
    N then the crowd shouts 'Poetic,poetic,poetic manifesta'
    lol.
    Drop it like its hot baby
     
  10. PoeticManifesta

    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol.. thanks yall.. just wanted to let yall know i was still alive n kikin!:drums:
     
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