Black Poetry : I use to love someone

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  1. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I use to love someone

    I use to love someone who
    Had a hold on me like no other
    A love that one couldn’t even phantom
    She was my world
    My everlasting breath
    I did not want to exist
    Without her.
    She made me feel
    Like tomorrow was hers to keep
    My everything was hers
    But she instead threw me to the curve

    She once told me that she loved me
    But if you loved me
    Why did you push me away
    I know I am no angel
    I have my demons
    But was that enough
    To throw away a man
    Who loved you for just being you
    A man who treated your kids like his
    I may be a lot of things
    And yes you can call me whatever
    But stop yourself when you try to say
    That I wasn’t a good man
    3 months have passed
    And you called me
    To come to your house
    And know I wonder
    Was that a mistake
    We did things that we use to do
    Made love passionately
    It felt like living in the yester years
    But when you called me
    Today you curst at me
    Calling me all sorts of names

    Telling me that
    That you wish I could have been
    The man that I should have been
    But what the ****
    I can only be me and no one else
    You once told me you loved me
    For the person I am
    So I sit here wondering
    If you loved me for me
    Why should I be a different man
    You puzzle me
    Then you call me at 11
    To tell me you’re sorry
    Baby girl I love you
    But sorry you’re too late
    What’s funny is
    That I can’t get you out of my mind
    You rule my universe
    Like the stars and suns
    In outer space
    And I wonder why
    Why did you say goodbye
    And comeback into my life
    Just to say goodbye again
    The hurt I feel
    I don’t wish on my enemies

    Do me a favor
    And please ad hear
    To what I am saying
    Yes I love you
    But I am not
    That man that you can
    Play like a yo-yo
    My heart is true it is not
    Yours to do what ever with
    So please do me a favor
    And just stay away
    My heart can’t take this anymore
    And as the tears in my eyes
    Began to flow
    I just wanted you to know
    That I miss you
    But I am sorry
    I can’t be yours
    To break no more.
     
  2. Wisdom7

    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was beautiful Defiantson! Hopefully enough of your absence will show her what she is truly missing and then she'll begin to appreciate how special you are. :)
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wisdom she already is, but I am not trying to hear her any more. I don't need the drama.
     
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    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes a love that deep deserves a second chance. I had a love like that and I acted like her as far as pushing him away, because anything he did minorly painful hurt 1000 times more only because I loved him that much more and I know he didn't understand my reactions. Ok lemme hush. I just a sucker for love stories.
     
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    feeling ya on dis here .......been their seen it all
     
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    Okay, I'm going there now.
     
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    Poet this was beautifull.....



    i just wanted to say that some things are out of youre hand....


    Somethimes people find eachother find sumthing beautifull...
    but evil forces always want to destroy it..."..

    i agree with watsinaname...


    you should lay it in front of god...
    pray for her and you If you are brought together by him...he will make the chance and it wll be alright.
    and work on yourself that these things wont hurt you anymore that you rise above it.....
    and ask him for guidance in everything in youre life...
    that Poem ""God spoke to me"" wasnt just sumthing....




    bless you and everything that is beautifull...


    much love to you Brother:heart:



    keep writting you have a great talent :geek: ...to touch people with youre poetry







    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes you have to love yourself enough to say no more. Been there, and I know, it hurts like the dickens. Powerfully posed.
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks all and trust I am working on that. Wisdom7 gave me great advise.
     
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