Black Poetry : I tried

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by icandi, Oct 14, 2003.

  1. icandi

    icandi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as i sit and think of all the things ive been through
    the pain i felt
    when you left
    had me feeling like a fool
    but some how you managed
    to rekindle the flame
    but actually you just upped your game
    had me feeling you changed
    I guess its me to plame
    now i know it was all in your plan
    boy at the drop of a dime
    i was in the palm of your hand
    had me screaming your name
    now its my turn to shine
    no stop and rewind
    forward is my new path
    and you had your chance
    i stayed around
    and you still played my ***
    so now that you know
    that i didnt give up
    i just got one thing to say
    I TRIED...
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am vibin on this - really nice.
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very Nice Icandi...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    VERY NICE FLOW LOVIN IT
     
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    nice flow
     
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    Feelin this.
     
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