Black Haiku : I TOO, HAIKU

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  1. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening Poets!
    It is time to kick off our summer session fun with a new game called I Too, Haiku.
    Now, In this game you will be using your poetic minds in progressive creations! This Challenge will kick off with three selected poets and these poets will be making some haiku's(YES! Same Ol' Haiku's:D)The trick is that as the game progresses, the creations will be a little more difficult. We will begin with each poet, incorporating one word in their poem, then two words into heir poem, then three...THEN.....(you will just have to see:D)
    Creation is the Key
    Just know....The person could be you!

    I TOO, HAIKU. SHOW YOUR EXPERTISE ON THE HAIKU RANGE!
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    First Up:
    Sister Soulosophy
    Sister 4EVERLUV
    Brother Howardtsu

    COME ON DOWN THE PRICE IS RIGHT:D

    1 Word
    Shaken

    (Oh yeah) Everyone Be on the look out......because next......it could be you:wink:
     
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    PLATINUM:
    I have never haikued before. I read them on the forum all time and have always wanted to try. So I hope I do this right. Since you done put me out here like this...I'm a haiku virgin. lol Okay...let see....
     
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    When I hear the beat
    of your drum go thump thump
    I’m shaken my humps for you
     
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    soulosophy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL, aiiight then sis Plat, lets do this....bring it on!!

    Abuse comes at me
    I stare in the face of pain
    I'm shaken, not skurred
     
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    soulosophy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    question pls sis Plat

    Sis Plat, I've read some of the haiku's on the site and some seem to have different numbers of syllables, but if I;m not mistaken it is as follows right?

    It is a three line poem?
    1st line consist of five syllables
    2nd line consist of seven syllables?
    and the last consist of five sysllables?

    NIce try sis 4EverLuv :) for a first time haikuist *smile*
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    soulosophy:
    Thank you...thank you...
    I figure the more I try the better it will get.
     
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    Yes Haiku is base on 17 syllables
    in a 5 - 7 - 5 format which not always the case
    but as long as it's 17 written
     
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    :eek: Yall are rolling!
    Sister 4EVERLUV.......FIRST HAIKU!!!???!!!!
    Well....That Was :great::great::great::D
    You have got this and you are on the Move!

    Sister Soulosophy!:D
    Whats up!!!!LOL
    Shaken...not skurred!!!!:lol:
    I feel ya sis!
    Aight....It looks like yall are ready for the second Level....

    [Music goes] Dun DUhn DUUUUHHNN:lol:

    Now this time you doing the same thing....ONLY:)D) Instead of one word there are two... theere is no specific order....but useing them in seperate lines!!!
    and they are:

    Words
    1. Shaken
    2:Wonderland


    Keep up the Great Talent!!:D
     
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    soulosophy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sis Plat, hey lil sis.

    OK, here goes:



    One powerful force
    Trees shaken by Its pure Love
    Divine wonderland
     
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