Black Poetry : I Told Her Hold Me And Just...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Apr 12, 2001.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...B

    (c) 2001 blakverb
     
  2. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love This!

    I understand this statement. Enough said!
    Desert Storm
     
  3. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    who needs a word
    when you can scribe
    With
    Letter

    Very clever bv

    *letHER*

    :)
     
  4. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes

    yes.


    A
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just remember the conversation

    surrounding this piece?!!...
    You know I gotz to give it to
    ya', because - ya' got it like that
    and I'm laughing when I read this
    piece because it says so much
    with just ONE SINGLE LETTER...
    You are YOUNG, GIFTED, & BLAK -
    --high five-- cause you make it
    happen!! :heart:n' erythang ya do-do-do!!
     
  6. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What other way is there. I admit I had to do a double take, but once I did, I got it and I love it.



    One
     
  7. saleem

    saleem Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    much much much

    props on ya!

    Dis is da shiznit!

    saleem
     
  8. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh yeah...hmmm, enough said.
     
  9. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    VERB....

    *OVERstanding*


    AlwaysLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
  10. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do you know how long!!!

    It too me about 2 double takes...a refresh twice and simply just to read and understand what was there. (What was there?) Deep without a description and yet still understood!! U got me...and i'm still luvin it!!!
     
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