Quiet Poetry Lounge : I to You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bluewater, Dec 14, 2003.

  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (from a spin off )

    To be called by my King
    I his Queen come to him
    And nest in the warmth
    Of the caress
    As I do feel the need
    I come

    To dwell into a flow of emotion
    As the stream gush fore
    It floods a vividness
    Of thickness ….. daze

    Ah yes My Black King,
    My Nubian Warrior
    I as Queen adore you
    As the passion raise within
    The nectar that pour outward
    ease the road Of the vessel
    of your manliness

    My joy explore
    Pour forward that wave
    Of the deep desire
    Wings fly higher
    As I to go higher
    The freedom of the dove
    Introduce a deep love

    I come to you
    The smoothness of me
    Erupts with the roughness of thee
    As the heat produce a fire
    Of ribbing desire

    The firmness of your grip
    The gentleness of your caress
    Flee into a floral bliss
    As you slip deeper
    And deeper still
    Into the cavern
    Of the flooding stream

    I do submit unto you
    Openly willing
    Together riding the storm
    As the wildness inside
    Increase more and more
    As I slowly die
    And reborn once more
    The souls now cling
    The heart now sings

    yes the blending
    The ecstasy
    Release
    As I do hold firm
    To the very end

    A Queen to her King
     
  2. GeneticSoul

    GeneticSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow

    u took those words right from my heart... and put them there...

    YOUre are truely wonderful... sis its honest and its true...
    the flow is elegant and touches me

    Gen~ETHIC soul
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    let one cometh
    from the beckon
    of thy King
    da Queeneth
    of heart moves

    Da caressin feelin
    of a sweet rapture
    made from da great
    heavens & earth
    of two drifting in the
    windz of blissful love
    touching all elements

    let the doves carry u
    upward unto thy kingdom
    and the golden key
    is held respectfully
    as the inner orbs pour
    a tasty piece of forever
    lay on thy lips as da kiss
    is laid wit passion

    let the heart be of thee
    so openly , willingly
    as i am of thee
    forth cometh unto da
    great floods of loyality
    and feel da essence
    of wholesome of two
    as i release my body
    as submit my soul
    promise my heart & love
    as it blend in mixture
    to a masterful warmth
    i so seal it until u arrive
    on the morning flyte

    the hot oils ready
    and the bubbles perkin
    as i explore ya true beings
    and set of a inner explosion
    only a divine Queen
    can free da behold spell
    where da lovin King dewell
    so forth i await one's beloveth
    in the chambers of captivity
     
  4. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you so much GenenticSoul..i you have have touched me with your kind words..:heart:
    straight to my heart:heart: thank you
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$

    a King
    to his Queen
    moving
    spirit

    caress of the heart
    move in the dark
    as two becomes one
    in the bliss
    of the touch

    the earth a warm bed
    the heaven a blanket
    caress the heart
    a sweet rapture
    blazing

    lifting higher
    towards the sky
    the feeling of
    floating on
    the clouds
    as i hold on
    feeling
    this wonderful
    flyte

    the doves do fly

    toward heaven gates
    each kiss passionately
    turns the golden key
    that do indeed
    set me free
    willingly
    the great flood
    explose
    as we enjoy more
    of the mixng of
    2 into 1

    feeling the essense
    of thee
    i do flow more
    like the sea

    the hot oil
    rubs
    the oil absorb
    as each stroke
    introduce amore
    only a King
    who knows his Queen
    can do the things
    you do to me
    i am captive
    in the chamber
    willingly
     
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    and from da echos
    of da heart da love
    of two blissin into one
    from da orbs of da soul
    together we unfold
    da rapture we hold

    from thy King
    to one's Queeneth
    da beloveth
    compassion
    roams da galaxy
    above as flyte is
    taken to air inside
    da romantic waves
    dancin airborn
    we face to face
    hand n hand
    the crown placed
    the roses given
    hearts enterwineding
    blending da essence
    of ya love i taste da
    honeysuckles from ya
    lips and kiss da heavens
    for thy one so sweet
    like da nectur of ya bliss
    we dance in hope
    and da blessin from
    grace place in the
    depth of beings

    let da love continue
    as we bond
    to a perfect lovin
    i hear da silent whispers
    as i caress it in comfort
    to savior within my heart
    come forth unto me
    and know da capitive
    bliss is so right so real
    feel da power i so pose
    as i feel ya soft sweet
    moans of romance
    da essence of beauty
    took me in grasp
    and so willingly openly
    i awaits in accepting
    come forth thy Queeneth
     
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    true as one

    wow! see you both truly inspire passion and passion does the same to u 2

    you both make my soul quiver and shake with those words~