Black Poetry : I Thought You Should Know...

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I had a million things saved up to
    tell you last night…

    but today

    I thought you should know…

    that I adore you because of the
    person you are and I love you deeply
    because of the person you make
    me become when I'm alone with you

    I thought you should know…

    that I know I will never, ever bring
    you pain or cause you to shed tears
    since an ordinary man isn't worth
    the heartache or crying over

    Feel me when I say I am more than
    ordinary and certainly worth your while;
    I could never make you cry

    I thought you should know…

    that I see you and I as great friends as well
    as true lovers; I know this is so when
    I hold your hand in my own and find
    myself caressing your spiritual soul

    I thought you should know…

    that I can love you but once in this lifetime
    of ours; but I helplessly fall in love with you
    over and over again with just the thought of
    your beautiful smile

    and lastly

    I thought you should know…

    that I know you feel the same way too

    ©GQINC2K2
     
  2. MsBerry_98

    MsBerry_98 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Knowing.... is good. Hot like fire, GQ. But then... you knew that.
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey GQ

    This is such a great piece dear one!!.... ( I thought you should know) :)

    N2
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GeeQue.


    ...**** you g'on make me take you back!! :D

    this is extraEVERYthing!! (RT)

    :heart:itsallLove.
    MEB
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    GQ..... set self free tell her all dat u know so she can know
    da love u hold ........beautiful man...........
     
  6. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    PLAYA PLAYA
    yeah

    flava
    ummph

    dssNY
     
  7. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the love on this fellow scribes!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  8. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ

    Very nice flow
    Scribe On Poet!


    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    GQ...man you something else......Tight Flow Right HERE!!!
     
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