Black Poetry : I thought u keep it Real...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by IlladelThug, Apr 19, 2005.

  1. IlladelThug

    IlladelThug Active Member MEMBER

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    Relax and listen, baby tell me why you're actin different
    My back is bendin', and I'm about to crack from tension
    We're past this friendship, why you gotta play with my mind?
    Ungrateful, and I'm, just about to turn my back and end this
    But before this crap gets twisted, there's one thing you should know
    You treated me like NOTHING! And still I'd treat you like gold
    The queen of my throne, I didn't wanna let you leave
    But you did more than put me thru hell, you put hell thru me
    Every night I fell to knees, asking why you weren't respectin' me
    Wishin' you'd stop, so my heart, could finally rest in peace
    Tell the devil "quit testin' me, and just let me be"
    But I know if I hurt you, my body wouldn't let breathe
    My eyes won't let me see, this pen won't let me speak
    You're what I need, and now I know how much you meant to me
    My everything, I know that we were meant to be
    Let's just end this grief, no more beef, just friends to keep...

    1 Luv
     
  2. AHMOSE

    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome back.

    Thanks for dropping this piece on us.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice to be reading u again awesome drop
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "But you did more than put me thru hell, you put hell thru me"
    Whoa, that was some line...You kept it real throughout this piece. Keep that pen moving poet.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I got respect for your pen poet.
     
  6. Intrepid

    Intrepid Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop
    keep the pen flowing
     
  7. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I agree, it is good to read you again. Nice drop.
     
  8. IlladelThug

    IlladelThug Active Member MEMBER

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    thanx everybody...this site showz alot of luv when it comes to feedback...i guess she'll enjoy it az well when i read this to her...lol
     
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