Quiet Poetry Lounge : i thought lost my soul*

thepoetsean

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someplace dreams are made of
Occupation
student, advocate to change the world
*that's how i felt when i left she*


the world is my unborn child speaking truth--
and my nose feels cut--
spiting my face--

peculiar--
something has arisen in I
been there but--
wants now to be charted--
claimed and accounted for--
that something is--
the
unDYING
need
...........for
...............you.

i left your sight and--
my soul ran back and hugged you--

a 'near love experience' i guess*

i need you like unsaid truths--
like circles need curves--
like sugar stays sweet--
like deserts have sand--

like loving you is
imminent--

i thought i lost my soul when i walked away from you--
but i lost my will
to be without the presence of you--
i lost--
my sense of direction--
because

*all signs point to you*

i feel snatched--
and i could care less--
you should
keep my soul
thus
leaving me to seek you out
therefore
completing I*

i lost my mind--
it's with you--
and i thought i just lost my soul.



****
sean.
 
Hey poet ...

this is nice.....


beautifull...


Last monday i was looking at this r&b music ours where they play only that tipe of music..and i saw this video of jagged edge walked right out of heaven...

i thought it was a great song ....good beat it makes a man step in to his car
and turn that song up and drive to the woman he loves and left ....

You kinda put it down here in youre poem...




Nice write...
keep on keep on..






LoveLibertylady:heart:
 

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