Black Poetry : I thought i knew u !

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I thought i knew ur love

    not until u showed ya heart
    your eyes was like diamonds
    sparkling in da presence of light
    ur warmth cascaded throughout da night
    the first time i saw your face
    it was like summer breeze taken place

    I thought i knew u

    your skin was a chocolate swril
    a secret admirer to enter my world
    soft spoken to my heart
    u came like a thief in da dark
    lovin deep like a roaring thunder
    in da mist of my innocence soul
    a rushing river of romance upload

    I thought i knew u

    But your lips was precious as we kiss
    touching bodies inside da mental bliss
    becoming my ultimately thoughts
    to an conclusion at the transversal
    of a new love that's abid upon us
    in a special time our secret place
    If i didn't love you i would have told u so

    I thought i knew u

    Where significant others clash together
    at the helms of rapture of sensual light
    on the maze of our soulful pleasure
    and take this journey beyond all measure
    where no single breath of air can come between us
    only the effects of our bodies we share
    in sheer gleam of forces as the universe

    See i thought i knew u !

    not until i know i have you
    come share my world above
    inside the place call love
    at the temple of rapture
    where souls and hearts are captured
    come share my world of existance
    and see what your all been missing

    I thought i knew u too
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa!...rich?!!! I thought I knew you till I read this one... that's real... that's real... (Someone pass me a napkin, gotta dab my eyeballs for a sec.) This was just real dope man... i'm in aww...
    D.S.
     
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    I thought I knew you but I guess I was wrong
    I thought I knew you but I guess our love wasnt strong
    I thought I knew you I guess it had to be told in a song
    Why you say
    Cause love should have brought you home last nyte!!!!!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Desert Storm , hey sis thank u so much for the warm love happy u like this
    well thought scribe if i knew u ...............smiles
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Naver............
    I thought i knew you
    through da technical bliss
    from da sway and happiness
    i thought i knew you
    where love abids
    and nothing comes between
    two souls dat's mend
    i thought i knew you
    what your heart say
    and the way we sinfully play
    i thought i knew
    i guess not til true love rise.
     
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    how could you leave me in the dust
    how could you let this thing between us go bust
    all we have btween is lust
    i just

    want to satisfy your soul
    someone must take control

    of our destiny
    dont cha want this to be

    what we hope and dream
    i mean

    dont you love me
    dont you want me
    dont you need me

    but i guess all this to was a game
    i knew i couldnt tame

    what was always in you
    i guess there's nothing left to do but to say

    I thought I knew you!!!!!!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    cute
    of the things u say
    and how da love stay
    i thought i knew u
    from the warmth of two
    when mending as twins
    i thought i knew
    through hopes and dreams
    from the sensual bling
    and the space as queen
    i thought i knew u
    until today , i know
    from the hearts glo .
     
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    $$RICH$$:
    This was everso beautiful....but everything you pen is.:)
    Much Luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank u
    just because
    i thought i knew u
    from da sway of hips
    to ya fancy dip
    and the way ya eyes glist
    into one sensual mist
    i thought i knew u
    until now from da feel
    of what's so real
    and the deal of my thrill
     
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    If you thought you knew her, you did and still do. Nothing can completely erase the connection of two. Intensely flowed vibe.
     
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