Black Poetry : I Thought About You This Morning...

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  1. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I thought about you this morning when I brushed my hair
    I felt your fingers deftly stroking each strand,
    each tug on my roots implanted tingles of joy in my womb
    and I just closed my eyes and imagined you…

    I thought about you this morning when I put on my makeup,
    As I applied my base, I felt your palms on my face
    tracing the lines of my brows with the pad of your thumb
    and coating my eyelashes with the mascara of your kisses…

    I thought about you this morning when I brushed my teeth,
    the minty sweetness permeated my gums like the coolness of your breath
    imagining your tongue as it slowly and sweetly navigates
    in a two-step tango with my own…

    I thought about you this morning when I put on my stockings,
    The silkiness of the nylon gliding over my legs was like your hands
    as you caress me ever so softly with your fingertips
    causing my faucet to release hypnotic drips
    of locked up passion that have finally been set free…

    I thought about you this morning when I drove to work
    thinking about how you drive me crazy
    completely controlling my wheel and directing me safely
    to the places your love takes me when we’re “riding” together…

    I thought about you this morning
    and by afternoon, you were still on my mind
    and I’m hoping that tonight,
    you will meet me in my dreams…
     
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    NOTE TO SELF: try not to read Danilyn's poems at work for it causes uncontrolable smiles that may be misconstrued as interest in da ugly woman sitting across from me...

    okay imma just playin...hey poet this scribe here is tight. if i didn't know better i would think it came from da meadow...let me look around and see if there are some missing tulips...

    definitely a beautiful read...made my day...

    one.
     
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    Pleez Ms Danilyn

    don't be soooo mean!!!!!!

    Loving your imagery here.... what a delicious cataclysmic mix of extreme mental titillation & pure peace!


    thank you

    a
     
  4. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are so crazy!!!

    :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

    Dnommo~
    You have caused an uncontrollable smile ova here as well!
    And yes, there's probably a tulip or 2 missing...
    Thanks for da :heart: !
     
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    Dani

    This here is a masterpiece
    Wonderfully laid down
    Nice piece poet
    I can feel the Love top to bottom.
    Thanks for sharing.:heart:
     
  6. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank U!!!

    Alyce~
    Any compliment from you is more than a pat on the back to me!
    Thanks for the love and support you give to my work. I've said it before and I'll say it again, I think you are awesome!!!
    (I'll try to work on not being mean!:) )

    Rashad~
    Thanks sweetie. U give me so much to work with!:)
    Love you always...:love:
     
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    Danilyn

    Whoeva is in ya mental like dat ma is **** lucky! Especially when you express it in such a classic word song.

    Madd Love
    Reas
     
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    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I suppose he is very lucky indeed!!!:lol:
    A classic word song, huh? I like it...
    Thanks for da :heart:
    I have nothing but love and respect for ya! :)
     
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    Dani.


    lil sister... lil sister... lil sister!!

    do you have any idea how much i am lovin'
    da hell outta dis heah peace?!! oh my God!
    it is beautiful-ly written... the imagery is
    fantastic!!

    (you sho' i didn't write dis?? :lol: )

    :heart:
    SunShyne~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    woooooweeeeee!! Danilyn

    just no wordz but u got it on da down low!:)
     
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