Black Poetry : I thirst for you

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  1. ephlat

    ephlat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The saliva in my mouth clings to my breath for cool anointing
    The roof of my mouth is glazed in sweat
    The skin on my lips are dry
    I'm in need of moisture
    I thirst for you
    My body looses strength
    Dehidrated
    My skin is peeling
    No lotion can help
    Water won't do
    I thirst for you
    Come quench this thirst with your love
    Heal my weeping heart
    Drown me with your mercy
    Let the kiss of your lips moistne my own
    Let it reach my roof top
    Rejuvenate me
    Quench me
    Love me till I thirst no more
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sending out an s.o.s. for love ~

    Will get you the likes of me ~

    Responding with love ~

    For what you do.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    felt the bliss of this one Love soon will rain in !
    nice drop
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is nice
    I like....
     
  5. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh yea,give it to me one more time........do that thur!
     
  6. ephlat

    ephlat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lurk you gonna get yourself in trouble. glad you liked the poem
     
  7. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    how??whut did i do...i was just playin..i do like it tho..its very nice....are u serious about the trouble part tho??i hope not....my bad!
     
  8. ephlat

    ephlat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i was flirting but nevermind lol. im glad you like it. i must say you are my favorite poet on here. your comments are always interesting as well as your poetry.
     
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    Ireadastory Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    umph, umph, umph! What can I say I love this drop right here. Took me down that memory lane road. Great write.
     
  10. ephlat

    ephlat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks alot glad you enjoyed
     
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