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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by plainrhythm, Sep 7, 2005.

  1. plainrhythm

    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i think i can't get you outta my mind,
    the way your dimples show
    when you smile, the crease in your
    forehead when you think...
    i think can't get you outta my mind...

    i think i can't stop...
    you brighten my days,
    you enlighten my face... you...
    well, i can't....
    i can't stop believing in you..

    oh i just wish...
    i wish you could...

    i smile...
    when i hear your name,
    when i read your messages,
    when i hear your voice.
    i smile...

    but, if only...
    well...

    i hear your voice when you say my name...
    but what follows soon after...

    "thanks, your a really great friend"

    oh i just wish...

    you would love me.
    because i think....

    i think i'm in love with you.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I think it's love ......no i know it's love
    this was sweet
     
  3. plainrhythm

    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks $RICH$!

    much appreciated! :slobber:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a genuinely warm flow, yes it sounds like you're smitten.
     
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    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Know that feeling! Nice poem poet!
     
  6. plainrhythm

    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol! i wish i was smitten! nah, it's not personal experience... just recollection of what happened between my best friend and i... until we... :bye:

    yeah. thanks family!