Black Poetry : I think So

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Dec 27, 2007.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What you mean
    I am to believe
    What you allow me to believe

    I can believe in the truth
    I can believe in any dam thing I please

    It is my free will
    My life and zeal
    I use to heal

    Cuts deep
    This life sometimes
    Looking around
    No one seems to stir
    Are they afraid to face reality?

    I think so
    When someone does me wrong
    I am going to speak up
    Tell every thing about it
    Tell Everyone until I leave

    If you’re good
    If you are coming up
    Helping to make things right in this world
    Assassination by a bullet they plan for you

    In Pakistan
    They just killed their lady prime Minister
    The world is about to erupt
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like you needed that release...let that steam out!
    I'm listening to you.
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    just hold on there poet

    the eruption is on tape delay

    trust me
     
  4. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    I think so too ^^

    nice flow!
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    death be not but i think so as well !
    here come the boom )))))
     
  6. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like it when you said, "
    What you mean
    I am to believe
    What you allow me to believe

    I can believe in the truth
    I can believe in any dam thing I please

    It is my free will
    My life and zeal
    I use to heal

    Cuts deep
    This life sometimes
    Looking around
    No one seems to stir
    Are they afraid to face reality?"

    Good lines
    DS
     
  7. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HI Brother Hodee
    we can believe what we choice
    and we was given the choice of free will
    to many have been tring for century to
    take it away
    Speak on Brother Keep it coming

    Peace~N~Love