Black Poetry : I think of you

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  1. Distant

    Distant Member MEMBER

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    I Think of You

    I think of you when I see sugar cain
    I think of you but I know its in vein
    I think of you when I watch the sky
    Your love for me learned to fly
    It grew wings for itself and flew away
    It comes back to haunt me everyday
    I think of you when I see a church
    I hope your religion is what its worth
    I think of you when I see the tree’s
    I was dirt and your seed grew all in me
    But once it grew that tree died
    For it needs love to stay alive
    I think of you when I see death
    Because my knife is in your chest
    I think of you when I see birth….
    Your red blood stains are all over my shirt…….
     
  2. plainrhythm

    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ouch... that was deep, it cut... beautiful!!!!!
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well done i hear ya from da distant
    tyte drop
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice drop.
    Thinking of her all the time.
    Go get her make her yours.
     
  5. Distant

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    thanks

    Thanks guys, I just post whats on my mind, whats happened in my life and how I feel at those certain points and moments.
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes someone can just can lay heavy one's mind. I hear ya poet. Flow on.
     
  7. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow....
    that is a lot to ponder brotha distant :thinking:
    May you find your peace of mind
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice release had me all in it
    thanks for sharing a part of you with us
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DEEP you said so much with so little words. well done
     
  10. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa, this is incredible. Love the way you brought it - mad love and respect. Wow.