Quiet Poetry Lounge : i think i'm falling

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by tzevi1278, Dec 13, 2004.

  1. tzevi1278

    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You possess the type of beauty that inspires masterpieces.
    A complete Master’s thesis couldn’t outline the details of your features.
    You protect your inner reaches from the creatures of the flesh,
    and anybody else who puts your virtue to the test.
    You’re undeniably the greatest she that He conceived
    down to the breath you breathe, is a beauty rarely seen.
    Spiritually serene, there’s a peace within your soul,
    mysteries unfold each time your tongue decides to roll.
    The sweetness of you speech is like relief to all my woes,
    and when I research your pedigree, it’s hard to understand the code.
    You’re genetically superior to the average bird that’s on the road.
    With just a single glance at the integrity of your stance,
    I start to understand why my heart is in your hand.
    The feelings you evoke are on a level of their on.
    I think about you constantly, you’re always on my dome.
    Physical perfection is a grand understatement,
    if God wanted to prove his genius, then his attempt at you was blatant.
    It’s these and other reasons that I place no one above you,
    and on the real, this is why I feel that in my heart of hearts,
    I love you.


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    © Kiastar inc. Krate Creations publishing
     
  2. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice flow Tzevil

    I like your description of perfection. What a woman to behold. I can see why you had to tell the world.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome flowing ya pen speaks out sweetly
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    me too...i think i'm falling...
    in love with your poetic charm
    and your wonderful wit...
     
  5. angelicsage

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    Poet...let's make this official ----------> I'M A FAN, FA SHO :welldone:

    "If God wanted to prove his genious, then his attempt at you was blatant..."

    That was my favorite line of all...

    *Snaps*
     
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    ..........truly a god-given flow!
     
  7. mzpoetic8705

    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW!!! This is indeed a masterpiece. I enjoyed every word and every pause. I don't know who this was written for, but they are very blessed to have YOU in their life.

    Keep doin' YOU
    --"If it ain't broke, don't try to fix it"
     
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